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Number of books read at the Burnaby public library. Please, could somebody correct it? :) The line graph illustrates the amount of books read by males and females at Burnaby public library in a period of four years, from 2011 to 2014. Overall, one can clearly see that the number of books that have been read increased steadily for both genders troughout this period. In regards to the amount of books read by men, it was roughly 2.500 in the year 2011. In a one-year period, the number increased steadily to about 4.000 books. Then, from 2012 to 2014, there was an upward trend, reaching the maximum peak in 2014, at roughly 14.000 books. In contrast, females were reading 2.000 books more than males in the year 2011. The amount of literature read was rising until 2013, reaching a peak at of approximatelly 9.000 books. From 2013 to 2014, the number decreased sharply, being 8.000 the amount of books read. ____________ 145 words
2019년 5월 30일
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Someland´s main exports. Please,could someone correct it? :) The bar graph illustrates Someland's main exports in USD billion in 2005 and 2015. Additionally, it also shows the future perspectives for 2025. Overall, one can clearly see that International Tourism exports is the dominant industry, followed by dairy products and meat products respectively. Regarding Internationaltourism exports, they were about 6,5 USD billion in 2005. After 10 years, the exports increased by 0,5 USD billion, and the future perspectives estimate they will reach the peak to approximatelly 8 USD billion. Dairy products industry is on the second position, having exported 5 USD billion in 2005. Moreover, in 2015, one can observe a dramatically increase reaching its peak roughly on 8 USD billion. In addition, future projections in 2025 predict a slight decrease to 7,7 billion. In contrast, meat products exports gradually decreased along this years. In 2005, the exports were about 4 USD billion, and a decade after, they decreased slighly by 1 USD billion. In the future, it is expected that exports will fall slightly, standing at 3 USD billion. ______ 171 words
2019년 5월 25일
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Describing a bar chart. Please, could somebody correct it? :) The bar chart illustrates the amount of social networks the Canadian population use. The data is presented in two periods, in 2014 and 2015. Overall, the majority of Internet users make use of one networking site. The number of people that don't use any site remains approximatelly the same in both years. We can clearly see that there is a sharp decrease in regards to the percentage of Canadian inhabitants connecting in one site. In 2014, 36% of the population used only one site. In contrast, in 2015, the population using them fell drastically into a 28%. Moreover, according to the graph, we can see that the least amount of people use five sites. However, it is noticeable there is an increase of 50% of the users in 2015 when compared to 2014. In contrast, the number of users connecting in two, three or four sites grew slightly in a period of one year. In 2014, a 23% used two sites, a 12% used three and a 5% used four of them. In 2015, the percetage of those who used two increased slightly in a 1%. The number of the population using three and four sites rose markedly, growing a 4% and a 3% respectively.
2019년 5월 19일
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Describing the book The Oranges Girl part. I The Oranges Girl is a book written by a norwegian philosopher, J. Gaarder. The plot it is about a 13 years old teenager, Robert, who finds a letter of his dead father. His father had an illeness, and when the main charachter was 1 year old, he died. Before this tragic moment, his father had been writting a letter to Robert, having in mind that this letter would be read in the future by his son, but without knowing when. Robert's father expressed to him his passion for the Universe, as well as all the concerns he had about human existance. In this letter it is also written who is The Oranges Girl, and why is she so important in Robert's life. By reading this letter, Robert will realise that he has more things in common with his father than he would never have imagined.
2018년 3월 9일
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Describing the book "The Oranges Girl" "The Oranges Girl" is a book written by a norwegian philosopher, J. Gaarder. The plot it is about a 13 years old teenager, Robert, who finds a letter of his dead father. His father had an illeness, and when the main charachter was 1 year old, he died. Before this tragic moment, his father had been writting a letter to Robert, having in mind that this letter would be read in the future by his son, but without knowing when. Robert's father expressed to him his passion for the Universe, as well as all the concerns he had about human existance. In this letter it is also written who is The Oranges Girl, and why is she so important in Robert's life. By reading this letter, Robert will realise that he has more things in common with his father than he would never have imagined. On the one hand, reading this book makes you wonder about your own existance, and gives the reader another point of view regarding life. The concept of enjoying your life, no matter which is your current situation, it is also brought up. On the other hand, I think this book should have gone more in depth with some aspects. In my opinion, there was a lot of questions to be highlighted that the writter didn't mention. Knowing the author, probably he had already thought about them, but due to extension issues, he had to shorten the story, and therefore, to write it in a more shallow way. To conclude, I wpuld recommend Gaarder's novel, because it makes the reader to wonder about different aspects of life that maybe they would never have thought about. Nevertheless, I would like this book to be more extense, and therefore, to go more in depth in some aspects. PD: Thank you in advance for reading my text! :)
2018년 3월 9일
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Which subjects should continue to be taught at secondary school? Regarding the National Teachers Conference, that had taken place in Barcelona on 1st March, all the teachers had been asked to expose which subjects taught at secondary school do they think are of a great importance. To know teacher's opinion is the key for improving the education system. In the following lines, I will expose my opinion. Firstly, due to my 30 years experience teaching History subject in a high school, I actively recommend this subject to continue to be taught. History shows what happened before each other's existance, why do we live in a society like ours, and why do we think in a certain way. It is an important subject to understand who we are and where are we coming from. In addition, this subjects points out which mistakes the human kind have done in the past. By learning from them, it is likely that we won't repeat them in the future. Secondly, I think Art lessons are of a great importance. Art gives the opportunity to explore ourselves through exploiting our creativity. By the time passes by, students loose their essence, they end up trapped in a frame, without having the will for exploring further away their capacities. Studying Art allows teenagers to feel freedom, to enhance their creativity, and ultimately, to explore new inner paths that studying other subjects doesen't embraces. To sum up, in my opinion History and Art subjects are very important to be taught in a secondary school. This two areas mentioned above give students the opportunity to know themselves better and to understand who are they, which I think are key concepts to work in, specially with teenagers. PD: Thank you in advance for correcting my mistakes :D
2018년 3월 7일
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Why Did I Started To Learn English? I started to learn extracurricular english in a English academy, placed in my Barcelona's neighbourhood, when I was 11 years old. In that moment I didn't know which was the reason why did I need to learn a foreign language. I was going there because it was mandatory, due my parents plans for me. Since I didn't see which was the point, a lot of times I was lazy for doing my homework and sometimes I wasn't doing them. After 11 years, when I was 18, my English academy had prepared me enough to take the B2 exam, which I passed. When I got the certificate, I decided to quit my English classes. When I started my university degree, I wasn't concerned about my English level, so I didn't have any need for improving it. Everything started when I did an Erasmus exchange program more than 1 year ago, which I moved to Croatia. There, I have met new people, although just croatians. Since in this country, television is not dubbed into their language, they were watching films in original version. For this reason, they knew so much how to speak proper english. After this experience, I realised how much I needed to improve my english to communicate with everyone, and to express properly the ideas I had.
2018년 2월 17일
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Ho Chi Minh city Ho Chi Minh is the most populated city in Vietnam. Formerly, this city was called Saigon. I have visited Visited two summers ago, with three friends, with our backpacks, deciding our route by improvising once we were arriving in a new place. I found this city marvellous because I was in a completely different culture, so far from my home. The houses were built one above the other , and a lot of them were decaying places. Nevertheless, entire families were living in their small residences, togehther with some farm animals, such as hens or dogs. In my opinion, the most impressive thing was the way citizens were driving. There wasn't any rule: cars and motorcycles were going through the road freely, without obeying the traffic lanes. Usually nobody had a helmet while riding a motorcycle, and majority of times you could see at least three persons on them. From time to time, you could notice alive animals, such as pigs or dogs in a cage, that soon were going to be served in a meal.
2018년 2월 14일
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My last work experience This last summer I have been working in a fish and seafood industry. The main tasks I needed to do were doing quality control of the products that were going to be distributed to supermarkets. Every day I needed to check the temperature of the refrigerators, production areas and boilers where the seafood was going to be cooked, as well as checking the quality of the products. Everyday I had to do the same, so I was not starting my job feeling excited, quite opposite, I felt bored because I knew that my tasks were going to be repetitive. What I liked most is having some trouble that I needed to solve, since I was changing from being a checker machine into being a human person that uses his brain and knowledge in order to do the things better. Another thing that I enjoyed was talking with workers that were placed in the production area. I could exchange life experience, opinions and frustrations with other people, so I felt less lonely in my daily routine. Nevertheless, the company where I was working was not paying workers for four months and people was really worried about their job, so they were complaining all the time, and this was affecting me on a personal level because I am too much empathic, so sometimes I was not having a good time while talking with them. Finally, they fired me after 1 month working there without receiving my salary. Even if it is a bad experience, I could learn a lot, which encourages me to find another job to keep learning and continue giving my best to solve troubles that needs to be solved.
2018년 2월 14일
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Can we become more eco-friendly by reducing meat consumption? Nowadays, vegetarian and vegan diets are more and more popular in the mass media, such as the press or television, and in several social networks. In the past years , this point has remained for majority of the population, altogether with which may be the causes to become a vegetarian/vegan and which are the consequences that can be carried out. In the first place, people may think changing their diets won't have any impact in the enviroment. In addition, probably it is thought that the way farms are raising the animals is more sophisticated , and animal welfare is taken more into account than years ago. However, several studies conducted by oficcial european organizacions, such as the committe FAO/OMS, had announced the large impact of the livestock farming in our planet. For example, pig slurry filtrates on the soil and contaminates ground water. What's more, to feed farm animals, it is necessary to use high amounts of soil to produce enough animal food, with the resulting water expenditure. To sum up, I think we have enough reasons to reduce meat consumption, since there are some official studies that points out all the negative consequences that livestock farming produces in the enviroment.
2018년 2월 13일
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