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I have a BA degree in Service (Hospitality industry, restaurant business and tourism). WHAT IS hospitality science?? Is it social science or humanities? Or something else? How do I consider it?
2021년 9월 12일
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Perfect neighborhood Hi there! I would be very greatful if you spent 10 mins to correct my entry! Please notice any stylistic mistakes as well! Thank you in advance <3 Q: Which of the type of neighbor do you prefer to have? 1) Someone who is quiet 2)is similar to 3) is supportive A: A neighborhood is a very important place due to the fact that we spend a lot of time there. No one can deny there are lots of types of neighbors who are good ones. If I were forced to choose which of the types I want to live with, I would definitely prefer to live with someone who is quiet for two specific reasons that I am going to develop in the subsequent paragraphs. The main reason is that it will increase the concentration on work. It is well known that silence can help people to stay concentrated during the work or studying. People are able to focus on difficult tasks much more effectively rather than if they are distracted by loud sounds. I have to admit that my opinion has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, I often have a headache and it is very difficult for me to pay adequate attention on any task. When there is a silence outside I am able to work hard that is impacting on my productivity in a good manner. That is the reason I chose a pretty quit region to live in when I decided to move in another city about a year ago. If I had not moved in a silence neighborhood, I would not have been able to stay concentrated during my work. Another reason is that it is a safe place to live. Any neighborhood that is quite is regarded with a lot of credits by people because they feel safe there. Furthermore, it is one of the most important aspect of any places due to people’s wishes to be not hurt. For instance, according to the statistics, seventy-five people care about the level of safety in their places. They think the more neighborhood is quite the safer the place is. Any of hesitations are highly noticed by the police. For this reason, these places may considered as safe places to live. In sum, though some may oppose my position, silent neighborhood is the best place to live. Not only will it increase your focus on important tasks but also it is the safest places to live. I would definitely prefer such as a place to live in.
2020년 6월 12일
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Please correct the essay Q: Your school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. A: Schools are very important places to students due to fact that they spend most of their time there. No one can deny there are a lot of ways to spend money on pleasant things. If I were forced to choose in which part of my school investigate the money, I would definitely prefer to buy a new laboratory for two reasons that I am going to develop in the subsequent paragraphs. The main reason is that laboratories help students to keep their interest in studying. Not every class can have a special equipment in order to provide experiments there. Teachers need to show how exactly the reaction happens in certain conditions. By showing this teachers increase the attention of students so they are able to maintain a high motivation of students. I have to admit that my opinion has been influenced by my own personal experience. About a couple of years ago, my school bought a new laboratory class and we started to attend it. I remember it was so interesting to see all of these experiments that we could have there. Many students improved their marks because they were interested in the subject. As you can see, if I had not attended the laboratory, I would not have been interested in studying so much. Another reason is that this new addition will increase the prestige of my school. Any innovation is supported by a lot of attention. If my school modifies itself, people will think that it is a good place for their children to study because every parent wants for his child the best. For instance, accordingly for the statistics, seventy-five percent of parents prefer to their children study in a modern school. It is really important for them that students can develop in a good environment. The more efforts a school put in their buildings the more students come to study there. It is clear to see why the school will be able to gain a perfect reputation. In sum, though some may oppose my position, a new laboratory is a good addition to my school. Not only will it increase the students’ interest in studying subjects but also help my school to achieve an excellent reputation. ____________________________________________________ Please notice my grammar mistakes, style of the text, clear explanation and so on. Thank you in advance!
2020년 6월 10일
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Please correct me! Did I write the sentence correctly? Particularly I'm interested in SUCH AS. Should I use ...SUCH arduous tasks AS TO... ...and be able to solve arduous tasks such as to enhance the way of preserving natural capital or maybe it's better to write: SUCH AS IMPROVING / SUCH AN IMPROVING
2020년 5월 1일
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Please help me to choose correct sentence! Which one is correct? 1) I chose this discipline not only because of my passion in saving environment, but I also find it interesting to work within a complex interface 2) Not only did I choose this discipline because of my passion in saving environment, but I also find (found??) it interesting to work within a complex interface AND on more question: I want to say that I chose (past simple) this dicipline, but I find (present simple) it interesting... Or I must use one tense?
2020년 4월 29일
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Do BA students write science atricles during their studies in America? And if they do, do they have a supervisor or something? How should I call the professor who helps students to write articles? NOITICE! I mean only students in Bachelor degree!!!
2020년 4월 16일
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What do students study during their Master's degree in univerities of the USA? Universities* Everybody knows that there are different systems of education in different countries. What do students do while gettinf Master's degree in the US? Do they researches, projects or something?Do they have to choose a particular subject of study? Have they a mentor for help? Do they need to attend lessons at a university?
2020년 4월 6일
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Does the phrase "in order to" need a comma? For ex. : I'd like to take it in order to become a specialist
2020년 4월 4일
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please correct my summary of the article the study is devoted to identifying possible ways to develop Russia's economic policy based on the principles of the "Green economy", defining the goals and objectives of the resource-intensive economy policy. Possible tools of the "Green economy" in Russia are considered, and ways of saving resources are determined.
2020년 3월 4일
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please help me with "THE" I wrote an article and I have to translate the title of the article into English. I wrote about ways to develop the Green Economy in Russia. Which of the titles is correct? Do I have to put "the"? "The ways to develop the Green Economy in Russia" "Ways to develop the Green Economy in Russia"
2020년 3월 3일
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