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Please correct mistakes I use the Internet every day. He often comes to the rescue when you need advice. I, like many other people, can't imagine how people could live without this useful thing before. I believe that the Internet has many advantages for me. There are many educational sites on the Internet that help me start doing something new, such as learning languages, playing sports, and playing music. Moreover, there is a lot of free material on the Internet with the help of which I prepare for exams. I also read books and useful articles in online libraries. in addition, thanks to the Internet, I can communicate with my sister, who now lives in Surgut. I also see the downside of the Internet's influence on my life: it leads to degradation. First of all, I can spend time on the Internet watching movies, because of this I read less. In addition, many sites contain malware that makes my computer blunt while working. Also, due to the fact that I sit a lot at the computer and phone, my vision began to deteriorate Thus, the Internet makes my life diverse and interesting, but it can also harm me if I spend too much time in the virtual world, forgetting about the real one.
2020년 5월 14일
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A friend in need is a friend indeed. In my experience, I have often been convinced of the truth of these words . Actually, a real friend is known in trials.When you are doing well there are many people around you who you consider friends But when you are in trouble few of them are ready to help and support you . It is a friend who can sacrifice a lot to help out and will be there in any situation. only in a difficult moment can you understand who is a loyal and true friend . I think that real friends are those who will not leave you in a difficult moment, and will be near not only in joy.
2020년 4월 27일
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Please correct mistakes))) More and more people are using social networks, as they see many positive aspects in them. Firstly, social networks have a huge educational content that helps you learn languages and expand your horizons. Secondly, you can communicate with people regardless of the distance between you. for example, you can communicate via video with people from another country or city. In addition, it is much easier for a person to get acquainted with each other. Also, social networks help people not feel lonely if they don't have friends in the real world. But there are people who refuse to use social networks because they see them as evil. Firstly, it is believed that social networks are harmful to psychological health. for example, people often strive to show an ideal lifestyle, be beautiful, rich and happy, as a result, people who do not have this, feel unsuccessful. Secondly, information that is displayed in social networks can pose a threat, because mass culture sometimes destroys moral values, which leads to the cultural decline of society as a whole. In addition, people tell more and more confidential information that is used by scammers for bad purposes. Thus, social networks have many advantages if people did not use them only for entertainment and did not waste their time meaninglessly.
2020년 4월 18일
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Please correct mistakes))) In a modern society, more and more young people want to live in the city to achieve success. Although there are people who are convinced that urban life can cause huge harm to health so they move to the countryside. First of all, the city gives a lot of modern amenities, there are better medical services and infrastructure various places for entertainment .Moreover, there is more opportunity for self-realization,promotion, search for a job in a specialty, get an education.Despite the fact that urban life pollutes the environment, people are trying to improve the situation and to be closer to the nature for this purpose they create park zones.However, due to the large population , the city has a high crime rate, which is largely due to the fact that many people earn money in a non-legal way, and more people suffer from various mental illnesses . Another disadvantage is that people have to spend a lot of time on the road because of traffic jams and intens traffic . On the other hand, some people prefer to live far from the city noise and rush, busy . The environmental situation in the village is much better than in the city because there are fewer buildings and transport, which are a global problem for the environment.In addition, people can enjoy the beauty of nature every day because they do not have to go far to do this. Furthermore the village people have fewer health problems because they breathe fresh and clean air and eat natural food.However life in countryside, the same things can happen every day so a person can get tired of such a slow, calm and quiet life. Thus, it is impossible to determine exactly where it is better to live . I believe that the ideal place to live depends on the personal preferences and character of each person.
2020년 4월 10일
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Where is the life better: in a city or in a village. In a modern society, more and more young people want to live in the city to achieve success. Although there are people who are convinced that urban life can cause huge harm to health so they move to the countryside. First of all, the city gives a lot of modern amenities, there are better medical services and infrastructure various places for entertainment .Moreover, there is more opportunity for self-realization,promotion, search for a job in a specialty, get an education.Despite the fact that urban life pollutes the environment, people are trying to improve the situation and to be closer to the nature for this purpose they create park zones.However, due to the large population , the city has a high crime rate, which is largely due to the fact that many people earn money in a non-legal way, and more people suffer from various mental illnesses . Another disadvantage is that people have to spend a lot of time on the road because of traffic jams and intens traffic . On the other hand, some people prefer to live far from the city noise and rush, busy . The environmental situation in the village is much better than in the city because there are fewer buildings and transport, which are a global problem for the environment.In addition, people can enjoy the beauty of nature every day because they do not have to go far to do this. Furthermore the village people have fewer health problems because they breathe fresh and clean air and eat natural food.However life in countryside, the same things can happen every day so a person can get tired of such a slow, calm and quiet life. Thus, it is impossible to determine exactly where it is better to live . I believe that the ideal place to live depends on the personal preferences and character of each person.
2020년 4월 10일
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Living in a big city is very stressful. All people who live there are nervous and rude. I agree with this opinion. Every day people who live in the city are in a stressful environment fast pace of life and increased noise level all this takes a lot of effort and energy so people feel more tired . Also, people have to constantly rush either to work or to the bus because they do not want to be late and get stuck in rush hour traffic. As a result, people often spend a lot of time just getting from one place to another. Moreover, people in big cities consider it most important to succeed in life . They want to get a high-paying job have an apartment a car and a lot of money . therefore, they have to live in a constant race for a better life and fight in a highly competitive environment for the best place. Thus living in the city people regularly experience fear and stress which in the end has a bad effect on the psychological state of a person. Indeed, a person can become nervous and irritable and sometimes take out negative emotions on others.
2020년 4월 6일
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If people live in the country side, they are severed from the political life of the country and don' If people live in the country side, they are severed from the political life of the country and don't know what's going on there. I degree with this opinion my experience says that In the modern world people have access to almost any information so even living far from the city they can be aware of the life of their country and to participate in politics. Also, to inform citizens, the media discuss various problems of the country. But many people living in villages have become disillusioned with the fairness and integrity of politics, so they no longer believe that they can influence political processes .
2020년 4월 5일
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please check theme of preserving health is important for the present time in which the cult of delicious food prevails. people have to struggle to resist these temptations in order to maintain their health. that as harmful food contains more harmful substances for the body . people should not forget that the main purpose of food is to provide energy for our organzim, and not the process of getting pleasure . Also in our time, more and more people refuse to eat a certain type of food, considering it harmful to health. I believe that a balanced diet is useful for the body.If a person wants to maintain their health and live a long life. He must take care of himself .
2020년 2월 3일
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Please help me correcting this essay We have more opportunity at present to Express freedom than our parents in their youth .Certainly freedom is a necessary condition for the existence of the individual . Since it is important for everyone to realize their potential in life . It can also teach the child self-discipline and responsibility for themselves. Thanks to freedom, the child can Express himself, because it is necessary for the formation of a confident personality. But on the other hand, not all children know how to use freedom rationally .many violate the norms of morality and even the law.. media culture, the Internet can negatively affect teenagers for example they use it for entertainment.forgetting that the main thing in the life of any person is self-development .after all in Internet there is any information that to be sure helpful but they prefer is thus meaningless spend time Also any information which is shown children must be proven so as mass culture sometimes destroys moral values that leads to decline culture in society in a whole. modern parents buy everything that is necessary for their child forgetting about the upbringing of children. thus isolating themselves from their children. But children are not always ready to take responsibility for the consequences of their actions and their lives. I believe that modern society needs to instill spiritual values with children. it will help us to properly dispose of freedom. And choose between right and wrong.
2019년 10월 18일
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rights ensure Rights ensure equality and justice of everyone before the law regardless of their religion, nationality social status,gender .I believe the most important right is to protect everyone from the cruelty of exploitation. a weak person who is not always able to protect himself should have help .It is especially important to protect children since the child is especially defenseless so that he does not grow up cruel it is necessary to protect him from harmful influences . After all, the future of our planet depends on them I would like to have the right to protect personal information on the Internet.with the advent of social networks, people began to talk more about themselves. And information about each was practically available to anyone . It can be used for evil purposes . Thus ensuring the protection of human rights is necessary in society as they help to get rid of many social problems
2019년 10월 11일
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