Hi, could you please revise the writing? The left part of the picture shows the current setting of southwest airport while the right part shows the future development project of converting it into a more comprehensive airport. At the departures and arrivals, a door will be added for each one. After entering departures, bag drop area will be added at the northwest corner of the departure hall. Check-in located at the left of the area will be moved to the right part and the Cafe originally at the left part of departure hall will also be changed to the left of the area. After passing by the security passport control, shops are planned before gates, which will relieve the pain of waiting. 10 more gates will be built based on the original 8 gates. Due to the extended area, the walk way will be upgraded to sky train which will be more convenient for customers. People arriving at the airport passing by passport control customs will see Cafe, ATM and car hire parts which haven’t existed so far.

The two pictures illustrate the current situation of the town of Norbiton and the future development of it. You’ll see there is a river running from west to east, seperating the farmland and town. Currently, two roads connects to the roundabout place, one of which is linked to the main road, another one connecting with the roundabout place is to be the main factory area. Generally speaking, the function of the area is simple. In future, the factory area will be modified to a residential block.You’ll see the bridge across the river will be built to connect to the original roundabout place. On the basis of the crossing place of the roundabout and the main road, there will be developed to a vice roundabout. At the end of the road on the east of original roundabout, there will be a school. Between the river and the road, a playground will be constructed. Because it’s a residential block, shops and medical centre are necessary which will be around the original roundabout. At last, except for the three roads talked about before, the 4th one will be built towards northwest from the first roundabout.

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1. It's not easy for me to share my secrets especially in terms of private emotions with my best friends. 2. The data in terms of quantity fluctuates more constantly and flatly than before. 3. Adapting to a child is not an easy thing in terms of concerns about their moods. 4. Renting a house in a central city is not as easy as you think, especially in terms of the balance of convenience and rent. Thanks in advance, if you have more native expressions, please tell me.

I prefer sleeping late and getting up late. After getting up, I get used to watching some funny videos while eating brunch, and then I start what I need to do in this day, like teaching Chinese, preparing teaching materials, learning English, and so on. I eat dinner with my friend who live with me, and we talk about something as eating. I like reading articles or books at night, sometimes having conversations with my friends. Watching movies is the best way for me to relax, such as Japanese movies which are my recent favorite.

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A special experience with valuable memories Recently I found some special snacks shops in traditional site -Nanluo old street- in Beijing. These shops especially sell snacks but not popular right now which is in-style of my generation. When I came across the first shop, my friend and I were shocked, in fact, we are extremely excited so that we rush into the shop. Without any doubt, the shop was full of a lot of people, however, we still continued to talk about snacks. The price has been improved 4times than before, so we chose some snacks which leave us special and great memories. Fortunately, the decorations and taste didn’t changed anymore. When selecting every snack every time, we couldn’t stop sharing our own stories of childhood about it.It’s interesting and strange that we even have same experience even though one lived in north China and another one lived in a small city of south China. At the end of walking around the shop, we discovered that a blanket was full of snacks. We smile to each other unbelievably because it meant we needed to pay a lot of money. It’s certainly that this experience was worthwhile. This shop is special for everyone who is in the same generation with us in China. The nostomania reserved here is the continuation of the past memory.

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