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Could you help me fix my errors grammatical in my assignment? MARKET RESEARCH

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Vietnam is a country with a strong tourism industry in recent years with more than 5 million international visitors and gets 620,000 VND billion in 2018. In addition, Vietnam also reached the top of the list of tourism reviews about travelling and living. Therefore, this is the "Golden Time" for Vietnam's industrial tourism expansion.

With the available natural advantages and the area's entertainment areas not yet developed, the mother's village will be a new destination with a unique model that no one has applied to bring “New Wind” to the particular Local tourism industry and the general tourism industry.

2019년 7월 30일
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Who are studying in Hospitality majors? I need some help ab hotel services cycle 😥😥😥
2019년 7월 25일
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How can I present these iseas more clearly? Could you check my errors gramma D&G Scandal in China

RELIEF INTELLIGENCE was posted in their own Instagram said that their account has been hacked to blame for the actions of a half and pieces of Dolce & Gabbana. This action creates another ware with thousands of comment from China People with a slogan “NOT ME” which was apparent everywhere in social media at that time. In this case, it is difficult to make entrepreneurs apologize. But when a brand's reputation is seriously hurt, an entrepreneur needs to have the courage to face the public. These plans are outlined by Judge Graham who is public relations D&G in recent years. but you have to remember that D&G is a private enterprise that every decision must be made by the decision of 2 founders, with these words, it is not difficult to recognize the overbearing and irresponsible from these two founders . It was the wrong decision to resolve D&G's public relations crisis.

After China Booming, The founders of the Italian fashion label Dolce & Gabbana has issued an Apology video to the Chinese people. The apology video was updated in the brand’s social media, Instagram, and Youtube account On Nov. 23, which the fashion brand then published across its social media accounts. You can see their attitude to “ask for your forgiveness” did not receive approval from the community and created a controversy in all the world especially in China

The inevitable result is that “The Great Show” must be canceled. The Great show was supposed to be the biggest fashion show in Dolce & Gabbana’s 33-year history—a 300-plus-look, 140-performer, etc. This plans compelled to canceled in aggression. China has imperiled the brand. The whole performance area became sluggish after receiving the notice.

The Instagram battles of the two fashion houses all have a common outcome: the silence is not conclusive and clear by the departure of potential customers like Selena Gomez, Elton John, Miley even Melania Trump.

In cases of customer complaints and inquiries, D&G's public relations team handled it well. The way they answer, supporting customers' requests is very polite enough to bring comfort and satisfaction to customers. This is my exchange and the custom service department, you can see that they have tried to meet my requirements even if it is related to their law policy, then apologize for not being able to help me. and said a good reason for me to be unable to make them difficult. one of my mail recipients is huash and forwarded my request to a higher level and was sent back by Anna. My requests are resolved quite quickly and with a customer like me their solution is successful.

2019년 6월 10일
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How can I express these ideas more clearly? Can you check my errors grammar? RELIEF INTELLIGENCE was posted in their own Instagram said that their account has been hacked to blame for the actions of a half and pieces of Dolce & Gabbana. This action creates another ware with thousands of comment from China People with a slogan “NOT ME” which was apparent everywhere in social media at that time. In this case, it is difficult to make entrepreneurs apologize. But when a brand's reputation is seriously hurt, an entrepreneur needs to have the courage to face the public. These plans are outlined by Judge Graham who is public relations D&G in recent years. but you have to remember that D&G is a private enterprise that every decision must be made by the decision of 2 founders, with these words, it is not difficult to recognize the overbearing and irresponsible from these two founders . It was the wrong decision to resolve D&G's public relations crisis.

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2019년 6월 10일
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My assignment This is my plan. Please give me some advice and fix my mistake in grammar. Thank you!

1. Make a list for potential employer(should have advantages to hiring you)

2. Narrative version for a potential employer

List

Computer: Microsoft Word, Exel, Powerpoint.

Language: Conversation English

Strong communicate Skills, work with diverse populations

Responsibility

Enthusiasm

Teamwork Skills

Hard working in Pressure Environment

2. Narrative

Honestly, With a few years of business by myself and go to work in some local grand, I believe that I can bring many customers to your company. I was sale cloth when I was a student that helped me to get strong communicates Skill with almost diverse populations, and a computer is a tool cannot lack off for influence my work. Then I went to work at Ninomax, Dallas cake, and Edso in recent years, those are jobs give me the experiences work with my team and hard-working in the pressure environment for benefits of the company. Moreover, responsibility, enthusiasm are qualities, I have learned, and imprinted in my mind.

Especially, I am an avid learner, and persistent at work, I do not promise to be the best person but I will devote and accompany you for the longest time.

2019년 5월 22일
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