Please check my grammatical issues. Thanks! The line graph illustrates the percentage of aged people in three different countries over a period of 100 years. Overall, the population in Japan, Sweden, and the USA sees the fluctuation from 1940 to 2040. In 2040, Japan stands out as the country of the largest population, while the USA is ranked the third. In 1940, the figure for the USA almost doubled the figure for Japan, with the percentage around 9% and 5% respectively. Aged people in Sweden account for approximately 5%. The proportion of the old in the USA fluctuates between 9% and 15% across a period of 80 years. After 2000, the percentage of old people in Sweden increased to 20%, overtaking the USA’s counterpart in 2018. Japanese old people maintained the same proportion from 1960 to 1988. The figure for the aged in Japan, however, will soar to probably 27% in 2040. In spite of remaining stable from 2000 to 2020, the proportion of old people in the USA is predicted to ascend gradually by around 17% through a period of 10 years. The proportion of elderly people in Sweden is expected to growth to 25% in 2040.

Please check my grammatical issues. IELTS Writing Task 1 The line graph illustrates the percentage of aged people in three different countries over a period of 100 years. Overall, the population in Japan, Sweden, and the USA sees the fluctuation from 1940 to 2040. In 2040, Japan stands out as the country of the largest population, while the USA is ranked the third. In 1940, the figure for the USA almost doubled the figure for Japan, with the percentage around 9% and 5% respectively. Aged people in Sweden account for approximately 5%. The proportion of the old in the USA fluctuates between 9% and 15% across a period of 80 years. After 2000, the percentage of old people in Sweden increased to 20%, overtaking the USA’s counterpart in 2018. Japanese old people maintained the same proportion from 1960 to 1988. The figure for the aged in Japan, however, will soar to probably 27% in 2040. In spite of remaining stable from 2000 to 2020, the proportion of old people in the USA is predicted to ascend gradually by around 17% through a period of 10 years. The proportion of elderly people in Sweden is expected to growth to 25% in 2040.

Please correct my IELTS writing Task 1 The line graph illustrates the percentage of aged people in three different countries over a period of 100 years. Overall, the population in Japan, Sweden, and the USA sees the fluctuation from 1940 to 2040. In 2040, Japan stands out as the country of the largest population, while the USA is ranked the third. In 1940, the figure for the USA almost doubled the figure for Japan, with the percentage around 9% and 5% respectively. Aged people in Sweden account for approximately 5%. The proportion of the old in the USA fluctuates between 9% and 15% across a period of 80 years. After 2000, the percentage of old people in Sweden increased to 20%, overtaking the USA’s counterpart in 2018. Japanese old people maintained the same proportion from 1960 to 1988. The figure for the aged in Japan, however, will soar to probably 27% in 2040. In spite of remaining stable from 2000 to 2020, the proportion of old people in the USA is predicted to ascend gradually by around 17% through a period of 10 years. The proportion of elderly people in Sweden is expected to growth to 25% in 2040.

This is my answer for the question posted on the blog by my teacher. Check my grammar, thank you!! Climate Strike has been drawn much attention since the human activities influences the environment, and could lead to the change of climate. For example, deforestation is the second leading cause of global warming and produces about 24% of global greenhouse gas emissions; the increasing use of vehicles lead to the rise of greenhouse petroleum emissions. As for the collective action I witnessed last Friday, I think the action is just a propaganda, which appealed people to protect our environment. Some of the participants made the posters to reflect the environmental problem which relates to climate change during the activity. However, I don’t think this kind of collective action (Climate Strike Rally) could save the world because not everyone who saw this action would fight against the people who damage the environment. Some people may still do something which could lead to environmental degradation and climate change for their profit. For example, logger need to cut down the trees to get money.The essential cause of climate change is human activities, if people continue to do something which could lead to increasing greenhouse emission, the wold would never be saved. Although we could have cutting-edge technology which is used to deal with environmental problems, those environmental problems are hard to be uprooted as long as people are still making bad impact on the environment. If everyone could make contribution to environmental protection by picking up a piece of paper, recycling, and taking public transportation, at least our living condition could be improved. While saving the world is not a easy task, collective action is only one part of saving the world. I think the most helpful thing I can do is learning environmental science, and exploring the best way to deal with climate change and other environmental problems in the future. I hope when I grow up, I can devote myself to solving more environmental problems. I think joining the Global Climate Strike movement is a good beginning for me to protect the environment, I am ready to help the movement anytime.

This is my answer for the question posted on the blog by my teacher. Check my grammar, thank you!! Climate Strike has been drawn much attention since the human activities influences the environment, and could lead to the change of climate. For example, deforestation is the second leading cause of global warming and produces about 24% of global greenhouse gas emissions; the increasing use of vehicles lead to the rise of greenhouse petroleum emissions. As for the collective action I witnessed last Friday, I think the action is just a propaganda, which appealed people to protect our environment. Some of the participants made the posters to reflect the environmental problem which relates to climate change during the activity. However, I don’t think this kind of collective action (Climate Strike Rally) could save the world because not everyone who saw this action would fight against the people who damage the environment. Some people may still do something which could lead to environmental degradation and climate change for their profit. For example, logger need to cut down the trees to get money.The essential cause of climate change is human activities, if people continue to do something which could lead to increasing greenhouse emission, the wold would never be saved. Although we could have cutting-edge technology which is used to deal with environmental problems, those environmental problems are hard to be uprooted as long as people are still making bad impact on the environment. If everyone could make contribution to environmental protection by picking up a piece of paper, recycling, and taking public transportation, at least our living condition could be improved. While saving the world is not a easy task, collective action is only one part of saving the world. I think the most helpful thing I can do is learning environmental science, and exploring the best way to deal with climate change and other environmental problems in the future. I hope when I grow up, I can devote myself to solving more environmental problems. I think joining the Global Climate Strike movement is a good beginning for me to protect the environment, I am ready to help the movement anytime.

The Ants and the Grasshopper Rewrite One day, ants are busy for drying out their grains they hoarded during the summer. They carried grains from their hole to the ground, and they chose a particular place, where was completely exposed to the sunshine. Some of them were helping transfer the grains from e Grasshopper, and continued their work. the hole to the outside, others were responsible to watch out around the grains. At the moment, a Grasshopper was searching for food to fill his stomach, he begged for some of the grains to eat. The Ants were shocked by the Grasshopper, because they always stored up food for the winter. They curious about what the Grasshopper did last summer. However, the Grasshopper didn’t do anything of storing up food, he spent all his time playing fiddle. Those Ants scorned him. They talked with each other that never shared their food with On

A stroy On a peaceful and cloudy day, Jane went outside without anything, even her favourite and valuable iPad as well as the purse. After a long time of setting on the chair and train her best to participate in Plato Seminar which is really difficult for her. Now, it was so excited that she got a chance to be released out from this stressful and gloomy area. Jane quickly walked towards the stairs thinking about what kind of thing she would like to do. Suddenly, a shadow of a heigh person appeared on her way to the street. It was her classmate Crystal. After she went down four stairs, she was totally exhausted. She pulled the gate and arrived at the central of the downtown. Cars and pedestrians streamed on the street. She kept moving forwards attracted by the bustling city. After a while, she looked down at the ground and around, realizing she was on the crossroad. She didn’t know where she should go since she was not good at making choice, and her mind was already disturbed by the buzzing dazzling city. Jane’s short journey from the building to the crossroad is just like out life, After we admired different scenery along wit the path, the time for us to make decision would suddenly come to us. As a youngster, never addicts with sunning views. It is better for a student to be ready to choose the road he/she want to explore, or the student will be like Jane who always stops on the forks of road