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Hi everyone,
I wrote a description of this photo, could you correct it, please?
Thank you.
Rosa
2022년 5월 17일
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Pourriez-vous m'aider, s'il vous plaît ?
'J'ai acheté une nouvelle voiture rouge'.
C'est bien?
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Bonjour tout le monde !
Quelqu’un pourrait-il me dire si cette phrase est correcte 'certains' ou 'quelques'? Merci.
10. Certains – quelques – aucuns jours, rien ne va comme il faut
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Skills and taste in art
I'm not artistic at all because I can't draw and paint, but I like art in general, especially paintings. Unfortunately, there aren't many art galleries in my area so it's hard for me to go.
I don't like abstract paintings because they seem to be just shapes and lines, I prefer something that gives me emotion.
One of my favourite pictures is "The Scream" by Edvard Munch. This painting is the symbol of the distress and the confusion of the Norwegian painter. Light also gives a sense of restlessness. The painting has a highly expressive function.
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Could you correct, please?
Essay: The importance of learning to play music.
Everyday we are bombarded of music everywhere: shopping centres, parties and even mobile phones. Music is force, energy. Nowadays every population has her own musical tradition.
Actually, a lot of people learn or can play a musical instrument for various reasons. At first, because of the power of music that is able to give energy and positivity; music is considered the relief valve of more people who enjoy this power and let them to improve and show the own creativity trough the ability of playing a musical instrument.
On the other hand, not everybody can play music, but can learn it. In fact, there are special courses in which people of all ages can learn and improve their technical abilities in playing one ore more musical instruments. The skills required are: passion, tenacity and patience.
For this purpose, courses are also organised for children, that improve their creativity, develop self-discipline and increase organisational skills.
In conclusion, a science research showed how read or play music develops higher thinking skills; in fact, the part of the brain used to read music is the same used in mathematical and logical thinking.
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Essay: How to be fit and healthy
It can be hard to mantain a healthy lifestyle in the world we live in.
Taking good care of your body and mind can make a difference in how healthy you are in general.
Exercising, relaxing and getting enough rest will help you do better and enjoy life more.
To mantain good health at its best all the time, we need to eat healthy and complete diet.
We must eat vegetables, milk, eggs, etc..Just ensure that we take in sufficient amount of carbohydrates, proteins, minerals and vitamins.
In addition, fitness is important for a person, For example, we can improwe our physical fitness by exercising regularly in the morning, doing walking or jogging and doing workouts in a gym.
In this way, we keep our organs fit and working and we avoid many diseases.
On the other hand, getting the correct amount of quality sleep, doind deep relaxation and finding enjoyment, relieves stress and anxiety and improves mood.
In conclusion, eating well, doing exercise and making time to relax, can make us feel better generally and relieves tension and stress.
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Email about the climate in my country
Hi Joe,
How are you?
I'll help you with pleasure for your project.
The climate in my country is in general gentle, but in these last years there is a lot of difference between summer and winter. Actually, there aren't the mid-seasons: the summer is very hot, especially in July and August; the winter is very cold, especially in December, January and February.
Summers are caracterised by sun, very hot climate and wet; winters are caracterised by rain, sometimes snow and very cold climate.
About the climate in my country I like winter, because I prefer cold temperatures instead of hot temperatures, but I don't like the rain, I prefer the snow and the wind.
About summer I like that I can enjoy the sea but I don't like very much the hot temperatures.
In general, I would prefer to have more gentle climate and the mid-seasons.
I hope these informations could help you with your project.
See you soon!
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