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I have written a sample answer for task one of IELTS exam.
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The two pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy used by Australian household and the amount of greenhouse gas emissions resulting of using this energy.
Overall, the six different ways that householders use energy do not produce the equal amount of greenhouse gases. As it is seen, the amount of produced greenhouse gases from house heating and cooling are much less than the energy used for them by householders. Although, the greenhouse gases emission resulting from refrigeration, lighting, water heating and other appliances are much more than the amount of energy used by householders.
Heating is biggest source of energy consumption by householders with 42%, thus it only produce 15% of greenhouse gases. In addition to that, cooling produce nearly 2% of greenhouse gases, while householders use 2% energy for cooling, and it is nearly equal.
On the other side, water heating, refrigeration, lighting and other appliances produce more greenhouse gases than the amount of energy used for them as, refrigeration 14% produced gases against 7% energy. Lighting 8% produced gases against 4% energy consumption. Water heating, which is another big source of energy consumption by householders, produce nearly the same amount of gases to energy that is used for it, 32% produced gases against the 30% used energy. Meanwhile, refrigeration produce 14% greenhouse gases against the 7% energy used for it by householders, which is double from the amount energy used for refrigeration.
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What does freedom mean for you?
Whenever we hear the word of freedom, the first thing comes to our mind is the ability to choose independently. In the world we live, everyone has their own choice of how they want to live. And freedom means to choose your own path without any force from other people.
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With all electronic and online methods of payment that we have around, it can be understood that we are already living in a cashless society. Counties like Norway and Japan, with 95% of cashless payment, are already become the examples of cashless societies. Payment without cash is easy and safe. Consumers would not worry for being robbed because of their pocket money. Online payment also decreased the erosion of money and decreased the costs of government for printing bank notes. Besides that, government can control all online or by card transactions. On the other hand, day by day increasing in online payment methods raise the concerns of online deceptions.
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Actually, I am not too much in going to cafes and restaurants. I usually stay at home. But whenever I decide to go out for eating then I go to a small restaurant near my house. It is not crowded mostly so it is best suitable for people who do not like noisy and crowded places. Beside a perfect environment it also has lots of delicious deices that you can choose to have. Most importantly, the people working there are very polite and respectful. They act very gently with customers.
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Although being a child has lots of advantages like you are not responsible for many things, people love you for your cuteness and innocence not for your position or many that you have. But It is always better to be an adult, because you do not have to relay on other you can be part of the solution and you can take care of other people.
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2. Reasons why people lie.
There are a lot of reasons why people lie. I think the main reason of lying is that they want to keep things secret. Sometimes people lie because they want other people appreciate them for what they do or what they have done, it is more like bragging.
Even sometimes people lie without any special reason, because it is there habit.
3 - Aug - 2022
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1. If I could become invisible.......
If I could become invisible, I would listen to my colleagues and friends conversations secretly that we they are saying about me in my back.
I would also find out all the secrets that government keeps them secret from people, as I have a great passion to know about governments policies.
Abd. Liwal
2022-08-02
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It is one the most discussable topic in management whether leadership is a science or an skill. If we consider leadership just as an innate skill, then there is no need of academic studies to become a leader. While it is clear that without academic and scientific rules, it is kind of impossible to improve your leadership skill.
In conclusion, leadership is skill, but without practicing and studying it as a science it can not be grown.
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It depends on people's goal that why they want to learn a second language. If someone wants to learn a language for academic purposes, it would be better to master it. But if the main goal of learning a language is just having fun and speaking with different nations, then a B1 for every language is enough.
Even though, people nowadays have the chance to learn different languages through the internet, but if someone ask me I would choose to learn one language at once.
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