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Wall_E In the morning i has seen a interesting movie that namely "Wall_E' in Starmovie. That film is great and significant to me. The film tell about the love between the robort Wall_E and Eve. I don't sure about her name is "Eve". Starting the film is the scene of normal life of Wall_E before he meet Eve. He live in a huge landfill. Everyday he find some useful things and take his home. He is very intelligent because he can think like a real human and he can show emotions through his big eyes and his lovely voice. Example, he can watch a movie and can decorate his house by colour light. His place is very neat and clean. A friend who live with him is a cockroach very funny, he usually run and run around Wall-E and do the same things that Wall_E directive. Normal day, when Wall_E focus to do his work as usual, there is a spacecraf come his place. Eve appears with her mission finding a germ of life. Eve is a robort very smart with the most advanced technology because she can fly, can shot to fire and can detroy everything. No longer, Wall_E and Eve become friends. Wall_E take Eve to his home and show her everything that he have. And the last gift that W give E is a little tree. When E found a tree, her duty is complete. Not long afterwards, she stop action. Scence of romance start beginning when W do everything to protect E staying away the hurt. The image that i remembered the most is W and E sit in a tiny boat and W sail the boat across the river, while E who is seen as a dead sit under an umbrella. One day, the spacecraf come back and take E return while W is working with feeling boring. W has run the fast he can to stick spacecraf. The journey bringing the tree return to earth is beginning. The word is limited so i can't tell all of story. If you want to know the ending, youi could watch this movie. It's really interesting film. I hope you ẹnoying it! Thank for reading and fixing.
18 cze 2013 15:04
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Wall_E

This morning I saw an interesting movie, that namely "Wall_E' in Starmovie. That film is great and significant to me. The film tells about the love between the robot Wall_E and Eve. I don't sure whether her name is "Eve".

Starting the film is the scene of normal life for Wall_E, before he meets Eve. He lives in a huge landfill. Every day he finds some useful things and takes them to his home. He is very intelligent because he can think like a real human and he can show emotions through his big eyes and his lovely voice. For example, he can watch a movie and can decorate his house with colour lights. His place is very neat and clean. A friend who lives with him is a cockroach, who is very funny. He usually runs and runs around Wall-E and does the same things that Wall_E does.

In a normal day, when Wall_E focus on doing his work as usual, there is a spacecraft that lands on his place. Eve appears, with her mission finding a germ of life. Eve is a robot, very smart with the most advanced technology because she can fly, shoot fire and can detroy anything.

After a long time, Wall_E and Eve become friends. Wall_E takes Eve to his home and shows her everything that he has. The last gift that W gives Eve is a little tree. When E finds the tree, her duty is complete. Not long afterwards, she stops action. A sense of romance begins when W does everything to protect E from any hurt. The image that I remembered the most is W and E sitting in a tiny boat and W sailing the boat across the river, while E who is seen as dead, sitting under an umbrella.

One day, the spacecraft comes back and take E returns while W is dealing with feeling bored. W has run the fast he can to stick with the spacecraft. The journey to bring the tree return to earth is beginning.

The word count is limited, so I can't tell all of story. If you want to know the ending, you could watch this movie. It's really interesting film. I hope you ẹnoying it!

Thank for reading and fixing.

 

<em>[Good work.  "Wall-E" is one of my favorite films.  The best part for me was when Wall-E and EVE dance around the ship.  One thing you should work on is the verb forms for 3rd person - I see, he sees, I do, he does, etc.]</em>

18 czerwca 2013
Thank for your comment, charlescuy
18 czerwca 2013
Thanks Olivia !
18 czerwca 2013
Wow, I have not seen this movie before, it sounds very interesting! Your summary really informs me. Your English skill is also very good. One important thing to remember is how to correctly use "present" and "past" tenses, such as "doing", "did", and "will do". Otherwise, good luck with your studying!
18 czerwca 2013
This movie is several years old, but it was still touching to watch. Very enjoyable.
18 czerwca 2013
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