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When I was a little girl I always dream to have a beautiful skirt.In that period it was a luxury to have a new close.One day my father bought a white lace dress I was so happy that I wear it all day.
Feb 26, 2021 2:54 AM
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When I was a little girl I always dreamed about having a beautiful skirt. In that period it was a luxury to have a new clothes .One day my father bought a white lace dress I was so happy that I wore it all day.
Just a few verb tense issues dream = present tense *Dreamed = past tense Wear = present tense *Wore = past tense And then the homophone (words that sound the same but are spelled differently & mean different things) *Clothes (noun) = things like shirts , pants , dresses Close (verb) = not open , Close (adverb) = nearby Great use of adjectives to describe the 👗dress (white, lace )
Feb 26, 2021 3:26 AM
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ly12
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English