Please help me correct, thanks!
Written Exercise 12－English Handwriting （英文书法）
This is a picture of my English handwriting that I transcribed this afternoon.
I admire those who have beautiful English handwriting. （我羡慕那些写得一手漂亮英文字的人）.
And I have been wanting to be one of them, so I started practicing mine by transcribing paragraphs from a documentary of BBC called South Pacific since August this year
As seen my English handwriting on the picture, is it easy to read?
What do you think of my English handwriting?
Thank you for reading! And It would be great if any of you kindly help me to correct my mistakes above.