Mao
Written Exercise 187 – DAILY OF JUNE 12TH Today, the weather was changeable. It was clean and rained several times. Last night, I went to bed around 11 p.m. because I stayed up late on Thursday night(or the night before yesterday?) but I did not fall asleep, instead I spent half an hour playing on my phone again and again. It is (or WAS?)really a bad habit. This morning, I woke up around 6:30 a.m. but I did not get up until 8:30 a.m. because I spent over one hour playing on my phone again and again and again! Yes, I have the bad habit. After that, I brushed my teeth, did the laundry and I finished my breakfast around 9:30 a.m.. Before lunch, I learnt something new and reviewed the corrections in my posts. I searched for an article on China Daily.com that I read a few days ago, because I saw the pronoun “ in which” in the article and I used it in my exercise which has been corrected. That’s why I needed to check it out. However, I was unable to find it again. In the afternoon, I finished an exercise about describing a video I have watched with proper tenses. This is what I have been practicing in the past week and it really drove me crazy. I think I still need to work hard on it next week. After that, I had a nap and talked with my friend on my phone. Early the evening, I rode my bike for 45 minutes and it was about 10km. The lucky thing was that no sooner had I got home than it began to rain. After that, I had dinner and took a shower. After dinner, I listened to the radio while writing this exercise. So far, I have not read a paragraph from New Concept English 3 as I had planned. That’s all! Good night!
Jun 12, 2021 3:58 PM
Corrections · 4
Written Exercise 187 – DAILY OF JUNE 12TH Today, the weather was volatile/the weather changed a lot. It was clear and then it rained several times. Last night, I went to bed around 11 p.m. because I stayed up late on Thursday night (or the night before yesterday?—both are ok) but I did not fall asleep. Instead I spent half an hour playing on my phone again and again. It really is a bad habit. This morning, I woke up around 6:30 a.m. but I did not get up until 8:30 a.m. because I spent over one hour playing on my phone again and again and again! Yes, I have this bad habit. After that, I brushed my teeth, did (my) laundry, and finished my breakfast around 9:30 a.m.. Before lunch, I learned (use “learnt” only for “had learnt”) something new and reviewed the corrections in my posts. I searched for an article on China Daily.com that I had read a few days ago, because I had seen the preposition “in which” in the article, which I had used in my (own) exercise and got corrections on it. That’s why I needed to check it out. However, I was unable to find it again. In the afternoon, I finished an exercise about describing a video I had watched with proper tenses. This is what I have been practicing in the past week and it really drove me crazy. I think I still need to work hard on it next week. After that, I had a nap and talked with my friend on my phone. Early in the evening, I rode my bike for 45 minutes for about 10km. The lucky thing was that no sooner had I gotten home that (no sooner had.... that...) it began to rain. After that, I had dinner and took a shower. After dinner, I listened to the radio while writing this exercise. So far, I have not read a single (更自然)paragraph from New Concept English 3 as I had planned. That’s all! Good night!
June 14, 2021
Written Exercise 187 – DAILY OF JUNE 12TH Today, the weather was changeable. It was clear but did rain several times. Last night, I went to bed around 11 p.m. because I stayed up late on Thursday night(or the night before yesterday?) but I did not fall asleep, instead I spent half an hour playing on my phone again and again. It is (or WAS?) a really bad habit. This morning, I woke up around 6:30 a.m. but I did not get up until 8:30 a.m. because I spent over one hour playing on my phone again and again and again! Yes, really do have a bad habit. After that, I brushed my teeth, did the laundry and I finished my breakfast around 9:30 a.m.. Before lunch, I learnt some new things and reviewed the corrections in my posts. I searched for an article on China Daily.com that I read a few days ago, because I saw the pronoun “ in which” in the article and I used it in my exercise which has been corrected. That’s why I needed to check it out. However, I was unable to find it again. In the afternoon, I finished an exercise about describing a video I had watched with proper tenses. This is what I have been practicing this past week and it's really been driving me crazy. I think I still need to work hard on it next week. After that, I had a nap and talked with my friend on my phone. Early in the evening, I rode my bike for 45 minutes for about 10km. The lucky thing was that no sooner had I got home than it began to rain. After that, I had dinner and took a shower. After dinner, I listened to the radio while writing this exercise. So far, I have not read a paragraph from New Concept English 3 that I had planned. That’s all! Good night!
Excellent writing skills Mao, pretty much the only corrections I have made is to make it sound a little more natural. Very well done.
June 12, 2021
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