Katherine Avila Guio
I’m from Colombia and as a Colombian I can recommend to visit these cities: -Bogotá: the capital city of Colombia, full of many industries and businesses, beautiful famous restaurants and clubs, bohemian plana to do. All around Bogotá there are many towns, famous for their food and entertainment. The weather is between 19 and 24 degrees. -Medellín: second biggest city in Colombia, it’s a very clean city, famous for its warm weather and food,especially for the dish called Bandeja Paisa. Its people are known for being very kind and helpful, with attractive accents and great beauty. -Armenia: the coffee city, with its coffee theme amusement park, a must. There’s also a butterfly farm with thousands of butterflies flying around you. Everything in Armenia is about coffee, you can buy productos to eat and to wear made with coffee beans. Its people are some of the kinds in Colombia. The weather is very warm and nice. -Cartagena: the most famous city at the coast surrounded by oceans and beaches, its climate is very hot around 30 degrees or more. It’s one of the most tourist favoured places to visit in a Colombia. Most of their cuisine comes from the sea and it’s awesome. -San Andrés: the island of the seven colours, that’s how Sand Andres is known, for having seven colours in their clear water. The island has a beautiful landscape with many coconut trees, clear warm water and soft white sand. Its climate is warm between 26 and 30 degrees. It’s a paradise, perfect to a hide away, most of its population speak English and Spanish.
Jun 13, 2021 8:58 AM
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I’m from Colombia and as a Colombian I can recommend that you visit these cities: -Bogotá: The capital city of Colombia is full of many different industries and businesses, beautiful and famous restaurants as well as clubs. (bohemian plana to do: I'm not too sure what you mean by this) All around Bogotá there are many towns, famous for their food and entertainment. The weather is between 19 and 24 degrees. -Medellín: The second biggest city in Colombia. It’s a very clean city, famous for it's warm weather and food, especially for the dish called Bandeja Paisa. Its people are known for being very kind and helpful, with attractive accents and great beauty. -Armenia: The coffee city. Its coffee themed amusement park are a must see. There’s also a butterfly farm with thousands of butterflies flying around you. Everything in Armenia is about coffee, you can buy snacks to eat and buy clothes and accessories made with coffee beans. Its people are some of the kindest in Colombia. The weather is very warm and nice. -Cartagena: The most famous city on the coast is surrounded by oceans and beaches. Its climate is very hot around 30 degrees or more. It’s one of the most popular places for tourists to visit in Colombia. Most of their cuisine comes from the sea and it’s awesome. -San Andrés: The island of the seven colours; that’s what San Andres is known for, due to it having seven colours in its clear water. The island has a beautiful landscape with many coconut trees, clear warm water and soft white sand. It's climate is warm between 26 and 30 degrees Celsius. It’s a paradise, perfect to a hide away, and most of its population speak English and Spanish.
Really fantastic. I would love to visit Armenia after reading this, especially to visit the coffee themed amusement park! In British English we use a capital if a colon : is following a proper noun. There were not many mistakes in your writing and some things I have only changed because I think they sound more natural.
June 13, 2021
I’m from Colombia and as a Colombian I can recommend THAT YOU visit these cities: -Bogotá: the capital city of Colombia, full of many industries and businesses, beautiful famous restaurants and clubs, bohemian ¿¿¿plana??? to do. All around Bogotá there are many towns, famous for their food and entertainment. The weather is between 19 and 24 degrees. -Medellín: THE second biggest city in Colombia, it’s a very clean city, famous for its warm weather and food,especially for the dish called Bandeja Paisa. Its people are known for being very kind and helpful, with attractive accents and great beauty. -Armenia: the coffee city, with its coffee theme amusement park, a must-VISIT. There’s also a butterfly farm with thousands of butterflies flying around you. Everything in Armenia is about coffee, you can buy products to eat and to wear made with coffee beans. Its people are some of the MOST kind in Colombia. The weather is very warm and nice. -Cartagena: the most famous city BY the coast surrounded by oceans and beaches, its climate is very hot, around 30 degrees or more. It’s one of the most touristIC places to visit in a Colombia. Most of their cuisine comes from the sea and it’s awesome. -San Andrés: the island of the seven colours, that’s how Sand Andres is known, for having seven colours in their clear water. The island has a beautiful landscape with many coconut trees, clear warm water and soft white sand. Its climate is warm between 26 and 30 degrees. It’s a paradise, perfect to a hide away, most of its population speak English and Spanish.
June 13, 2021
-Armenia: The coffee city. Its coffee themed amusement park is a must see.
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June 13, 2021
I’m from Colombia and as a Colombian I can recommend to visit these cities: -Bogotá: the capital city of Colombia, full of many industries and businesses, beautiful famous restaurants and clubs, bohemian plana to do. All around Bogotá there are many towns, famous for their food and entertainment. The weather is between 19 and 24 degrees. -Medellín: second biggest city in Colombia, it’s a very clean city, famous for its warm weather and food,especially for the dish called Bandeja Paisa. Its people are known for being very kind and helpful, with attractive accents and great beauty. -Armenia: the coffee city, with its coffee theme amusement park, a must. There’s also a butterfly farm with thousands of butterflies flying around you. Everything in Armenia is about coffee, you can buy productos to eat and to wear made with coffee beans. Its people are some of the kinds in Colombia. The weather is very warm and nice. -Cartagena: the most famous city at the coast surrounded by oceans and beaches, its climate is very hot around 30 degrees or more. It’s one of the most tourist favoured places to visit in a Colombia. Most of their cuisine comes from the sea and it’s awesome. -San Andrés: the island of the seven colours, that’s how Sand Andres is known, for having seven colours in their clear water. The island has a beautiful landscape with many coconut trees, clear warm water and soft white sand. Its climate is warm between 26 and 30 degrees. It’s a paradise, perfect to a hide away, most of its population speak English and Spanish.
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June 13, 2021
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