Isabella and Jessie
I have been working all week. Now it’s time for me to rest this evening. I find that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing for me. So I went there and ate boiled Congee with meat and lettuce, fried rice noodles and red bean soup for dinner. After I got back home, I did laundry and picked up things. Then, I tutored my daughter to do a picture description in Chinese. She searched online and chose to write a description about the painting, Mona Lisa. She looked at the painting carefully and wrote about something I hadn’t (or-haven’t) never noticed before, for instance, Mona Lisa in the painting doesn’t have eyebrows!
Jun 18, 2021 3:33 PM
Corrections · 8
I find that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing for me. Hi Jessie and Isabella, I agree with the corrections my colleagues have already suggested. Just want to put my two cents in. I would rather say, 'I find eating in the cafeteria quite relaxing'. It sounds more fluent to me. Hope this helps. Warm greetings, Anna
June 19, 2021
I have been working all week and now it’s time for me to rest this evening. I find that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing. So I went there and ate boiled Congee with meat and lettuce, fried rice noodles and red bean soup for dinner. After I got back home, I did the laundry and tidied up. Then, I tutored my daughter to write a picture description in Chinese. She searched online and chose to write a description about the painting, Mona Lisa. She looked at the painting carefully and wrote about something I hadn’t ever noticed before, for instance, Mona Lisa in the painting doesn’t have eyebrows!
June 18, 2021
I have been working all week. Now it’s time for me to rest this evening. I find that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing for me. So I went there and ate boiled Congee with meat and lettuce, fried rice noodles and red bean soup for dinner. After I got back home, I did laundry and cleaned up things. Then, I tutored my daughter to write a picture description in Chinese. She searched online and chose to write a description about the painting, Mona Lisa. She looked at the painting carefully and wrote about something I had never noticed before; Mona Lisa doesn’t have eyebrows!
June 18, 2021
This was really good, the only issue is, after hadn't, you don't need to put the word "never". You can't say hadn't noticed.
June 18, 2021
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