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I cried last year when my senior graduated from school. I was very sad and worried about next. I don't like crying because it seems to be lost but if I will be adult, I can't cry. Although, I felt very sad,,,
Jun 21, 2021 1:22 AM
Corrections · 2
*I cried last year when my senior graduated from school. (correct if you mean a friend of yours was a senior in your school and she/he graduated.) *I cried last year when I graduated from school. (if you mean YOU graduated from school) I was very sad and worried about what will happen next. I don't like crying because it seems to be lost (I couldn`t tell what you mean here) but if I become an adult, I wouldn`t cry even if I feel very sad.
your last two sentences weren`t very clear to me. what did you mean by saying "I don`t like crying because it seems very lost"? And also, if by " but if I will be adult, I can't cry. Although, I felt very sad,,," you meant you will not cry as an adult no matter how sad you are, then I corrected it to mean so. Otherwise, feel free to explain more and I will help you with any correction needed ;)
June 23, 2021
I cried last year when my senior graduated from school. I was very sad and worried about what will happen next . I don't like crying because it seems to be lost but if I will be adult, I can't cry. Although, I felt very sad, I couldn't cry
「 I don't like crying because it seems to be lost but if I will be adult, I can't cry.」何を伝えたいんですか?
June 23, 2021
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