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건강을 향상하기 위해 제가 가장 좋은 것이 운동이에요. 운동은 몸의 건강만 말고 마음의 건강위해도 좋다고 생각해요.
Sep 12, 2021 11:20 AM
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제 건강을 향상하기 위해 가장 좋은 것은 운동이에요. 운동은 몸의 건강뿐만 아니라 마음의 건강을 위해서도 좋다고 생각해요.
September 13, 2021
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건강을 향상하기 위해 *제가 (You can omit it or you probably meant "제게") 가장 좋은 것이 운동이에요. 운동은 몸의 *건강 말고도 마음의 건강을 위해서도 좋다고 생각해요. *N-말고도 = Aside from~/Besides~
Great job :)! 잘하셨습니다 :)!
September 12, 2021
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Erika
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English, Japanese, Korean
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