Maria
Day 310/365 Hi there! This picture is from my hometown. My mother sent me it today. The autumn there is wonderful and so colorful! The weather wasn't so good there, it was raining about all last month. Finally, from Monday everything changed. Now it's dry and comfortable. Unfortunately here in China I can say that the autumn comes. Yes, the weather is much better than before, but it still not so brightly like in my hometown. I think it'll be soon. Today I made a lot of preparation for different meals. I cooked delicious rice with seafood for our lunch. Unfortunately I don't have any pictures,we ate everything so quickly...
Oct 15, 2021 2:22 PM
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Day 310/365 Hi there! This picture is from my hometown. My mother sent me it today. The autumn there is wonderful and so colorful! The weather wasn't so good there, it was raining about all last month. Finally, from Monday everything changed. Now it's dry and comfortable. Unfortunately here in China, I can say that autumn comes. Yes, the weather is much better than before, but it is still not so bright like in my hometown. I think it'll be soon. Today I made a lot of preparation for different meals. I cooked delicious rice with seafood for our lunch. Unfortunately, I don't have any pictures, we ate everything so quickly...
October 15, 2021
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Day 310/365 Hi there! This picture is from my hometown. My mother sent ~me it~ (it to me) today. The autumn there is wonderful and so colorful! The weather wasn't so good there, it was raining ~about all last month~. (Completely last month). Finally, from Monday everything changed. Now it's dry and comfortable. Unfortunately here in China I can say that the autumn ~comes~ (Arrives). Yes, the weather is much better than before, but it (is) still not ~so brightly like in my hometown~. (Not as bright as my hometown) *(When you use unfortunately, it's better to end the sentence completely with something you do not like - e.g "Unfortunately here in China, I can say that the Autumn arrives but it's not as bright as it is in my hometown")* (but) I ~think~ (hope) it'll be soon. ~Today I made a lot of preparation for different meals.~ (Today I prepared a lot for different kinds of meals). I cooked delicious rice with seafood for our lunch. Unfortunately I don't have any pictures (as) we ate everything so quickly...
October 15, 2021
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