Zhanna
In my free time I love to cook cookies, cupcakes and cakes. But my family don't very like sweet. And I am happy to treat it to my friends and colleagues.
Feb 19, 2021 9:56 AM
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In my free time I love to cook cookies, cupcakes and cakes. But my family don't very like sweet. And I am happy to treat it to my friends and colleagues.
Hey, I’m looking for someone to improve my English. I would love to discuss a lot with you
Feb 19, 2021 2:00 PM
In my free time I love to bake cookies, cupcakes and cakes. However, the members of my family don't like sweet things very much so I am happy to treat my friends and colleagues to them.
Cook cookies is not wrong, but it is a bit strange to have similar words together like that. 'I am a builder, I build buildings' sounds odd! I changed family to members of my family because it is then clear you need don't rather than doesn't. Actually cupcakes and cakes is a little strange. What do you mean by cakes compared with cupcakes? I love to bake cookies and both cupcakes and other types of cake. I like baking too, maybe I will make cookies today!
Feb 19, 2021 10:33 AM
In my free time, I love to bake cookies, cupcakes, and cakes. However, my family doesn’t like sweets very much. I am happy to treat my friends and colleagues.
I hope this helps! I actually teach English on italki, and I am a native speaker. Let me know if I can help. 🙂
Feb 19, 2021 8:51 PM
In my free time I love to cook cookies, cupcakes and cakes. But my family doesn’t really like sweet things. So I am happy to treat my friends and colleagues to them instead.
Feb 19, 2021 10:01 AM
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Zhanna
Language Skills
Belarusian, English, Russian
Learning Language
English