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It is better to do things with other people or to do them on your own?
Usually, doing things with other people can be useful in order to open your horizons and improve your knowledge. But in some activities or situations it can be better to do things alone.
Firstly, while you are at school, doing things with your schoolmates is very important. You can build a stronger relationship with them and it can help you to deal with school’s troubles. Moreover, studying with other people can be less dull and you can learn new things from them.
Secondly, as far as sport activities are concerned, it depends on the one you play. On the one hand, if you are a swimmer, it is better to train alone as you can control your time. On the other hand, if you play football, you have to play with your teammates, so it is important to work out together.
In conclusion, in my view, it is also true that what is better depends also on yourself. If you do well working with people, it is better to do things with them. On the other hand, if you do your best when alone, it is unnecessary to work with other people.