Hannn__취청✨
There are a lot of things that I'm thankful of that I couldn't describe into words. First of all, I just wanna say thank you to my parents for growing me up, so that I could type out all of these words. I'm also thankful that I could wake up in every single morning to me and watch the wonderful sunset in the evening. Being able to walk, touch and feel things is just amazing. And lastly, thank you so much for taking your time to read this. I know I have a lot more to learn, so hope you could correct my mistakes through my sentences. And again, thank you!
Feb 19, 2021 12:48 PM
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There are many things that I'm thankful for that I cannot adequately describe with words. On the other hand, fortunately, there are a few things that I am thankful for that I can express with words. First, I just want to say a heartfelt “Thank you” to my parents for raising me, for keeping me healthy, for supporting me mentally and emotionally throughout my life, as well as being good role models. It truly is my sincere pleasure to type out these words of gratitude in public. Second, I'm also thankful that I am able to wake up each morning, experience whatever happens that day, and then be able to watch the wonderful sunset in the evening. Simply being alive, to interact with others, as well as then being able to walk, touch and feel things in this world is just amazing! And finally, I want to thank you so much for taking the time to read this. I know that I have a lot more to learn regarding English, so I hope you would be kind enough to correct any mistakes that I've made in my sentences. Again, thank you.
Hi Hannn. Good job! Whatever changes I made were merely to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. Overall, I could easily understand everything you were trying to tell me, as the reader, thus, IMHO, your ability and use of English is at a higher level. I felt, however, that a few of your sentences, their constructions, were a bit awkward, though, so perhaps read more books, magazines, news articles, etc., in English, to not only improve your vocabulary, but also expose yourself to good sentence composition. Best of luck. P.S. Yes, I agree, we all should be grateful for the numerous sacrifices our parents have made on our behalf!
Feb 20, 2021 4:37 AM
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Hannn__취청✨
Language Skills
English, Korean, Vietnamese
Learning Language
Korean