Olga Sapozhnikova
Would you correct this text for me, please? 365 days of writing prompts February 19 Nightmares Describe the last nightmare you remember having. What do you think it means? I was going through Petrogradka. It's an old district of Saint-Petersburg with beautiful buildings which were built in the last century, I mean the end of the 18th or the beginning of the 19th. There are several ones which are almost destroyed. I got into one of them. I know this one in real life and where it is located. The light was pouring through the broken windows. I didn't want to go further but step by step I went. Then I saw the dark man silhouette at the end of the gloomy corridor. The fear stroke me like a big fist. I decided that I don't want to play this game, turned around, and jumped through the nearest window. I have a happy habit when I remember that I dream I love to fly. So in this dream, I just flew away and woke up with my heart in my throat. I don't know what does it mean. Maybe some dark part of my mind decided to talk with me? #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
Feb 19, 2021 6:55 PM
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Would you correct this text for me, please? 365 days of writing prompts February 19 Nightmares Describe the last nightmare you remember having. What do you think it means? I was walking/driving/cycling through Petrogradka. It's an old district of Saint-Petersburg with beautiful buildings which were built in the last century, I mean the end of the 18th or the beginning of the 19th. There are several ones which are almost destroyed. I went into one of them. I know this one in real life and where it is located. The light was pouring through the broken windows. I didn't want to go (any) further but step by step I went further along. Then I saw a silhouette of a man at the end of the gloomy corridor. Fear struck me like a big fist. I decided that I didn't want to play this game, (so I) turned around, and jumped through the nearest window. I have a happy habit: I remember in my dream that I love to fly. So in this dream, I just flew away and woke up with my heart in my throat. I don't know what it means. Maybe some dark part of my mind decided to talk with me? #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
I have a happy habit when I remember that I dream I love to fly. -- this is unclear. Do you mean, "When I'm having a bad dream, I remember in the dream that I can fly"?
February 19, 2021
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