Wika Ramshi
Today I went to a orchestral concert in Cracow philharmonic. In program was Schubert’s, Bellini’s and Haydn’s melodies. I very enjoyed the sounds of violins and others strings instruments, like double bass and cello. The concert hall was beautiful, in gold and beige colors, and has a lot of space. I’m happy, that in Poland theaters, museums and concert halls was open, because we need this places in this crazy time for our souls and minds.
Feb 20, 2021 1:17 AM
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Today I went to a orchestral concert of the Cracow Philharmonic Orchestra (I guess this is corrects) . In the program was Schubert’s, Bellini’s and Haydn’s melodies. I very much enjoyed the sounds of violins and others string instruments, like double bass and cello. The concert hall was beautiful, in gold and beige colors, and had a lot of space. I’m happy, that in Poland theaters, museums and concert halls are open, because we need these places in this crazy time for our souls and minds.
Well done, yes it must be nice. I went to Cracow once. It has a very lovely square and obviously it is near to Auschwitz, which is an emotional place to visit.
February 20, 2021
Today I went to a orchestral concert at the Cracow Philharmonic. In the program were melodies by Schubert, Bellini, and Haydn. I very much enjoyed the sounds of violins and other string instruments, like the double bass and cello. The concert hall was beautiful, in gold and beige colors, and had a lot of space. I’m happy that in Poland theaters, museums and concert halls are open, because we need these places in this crazy time for our souls and minds.
Be consistent with verb tenses. For example, either "The hall was beautiful and had a lot of space," or "The hall is beautiful and has a lot of space." Nice work!
February 20, 2021
Today I went to a orchestral concert in Cracow philharmonic. In program was Schubert’s, Bellini’s and Haydn’s melodies. I very enjoyed the sounds of violins and others strings instruments, like double bass and cello. The concert hall was beautiful, in gold and beige colors, and has a lot of space. I’m happy, that in Poland theaters, museums and concert halls was open, because we need this places in this crazy time for our souls and minds
Good work overall. This would probably not bother most readers, but as a musician, it sounds little odd to say you heard just the melodies. What about the harmonies, counterpoint, form etc. Or what if one of the pieces didn't have much of a melody. You could say you heard pieces, or symphonies, etc. But like I said, most non-musicians won't be bothered by this.
February 20, 2021
Today I went to attend the orchestra in Cracow philharmonic. In the program was Schubert’s, Bellini’s and Haydn’s melodies. I enjoyed the sounds of violins and others strings instruments, like double bass and cello. The concert hall was beautiful, with colours of gold and beige and it is quite spacious. I’m happy, that in Poland the theaters, museums and concert halls remain open, because we need places like this to calm our bodies and souls in these crazy times
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February 20, 2021
Today I went to a orchestral concert in Cracow philharmonic. In program was Schubert’s, Bellini’s and Haydn’s melodies. I very enjoyed the sounds of violins and others strings instruments, like double bass and cello. The concert hall was beautiful, in gold and beige colors, and has a lot of space. I’m happy, that in Poland theaters, museums and concert halls was open, because we need this places in this crazy time for our souls and minds. Waooo that souns amazing !!
February 20, 2021
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