It's been almost for four years since I've graduated from my high school. I donnot like my high school's life because I felt much pressure and boring.I also suffered something, about that, I hoped tha

Judy

It's been almost for four years since I've graduated from my high school. I donnot like my high school's life because I felt much pressure and boring.I also suffered something, about that, I hoped that it never happen again.Fortunately, I've been met a lot of brilliant teachers and some good friends in my college school.In a word, I love my college school life.

Feb 20, 2021 5:13 AM

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It's been almost four years since I've graduated from high school. I Didn’t like my high school life because it was so pressuring and tiring back then. I used to suffer because of something that has happened to me in that time, but I hope it never happens again. Fortunately, I've met a lot of brilliant teachers and some good friends in my college. In another words, I love my college life more.

You don’t have to say “college school”. Saying only “college” is better and more understandable. You can also use the word “university” which is sometimes called as “uni” only. Also there maybe one word for both “tired” and “bored” in your language but, in English “bored” and “tired” could mean differently. Although they are kind of the same, but it can affect on what you mean. + I hope you’re ok now 😊 btw your English is sooooo good already 😚. You can do better~ fighting! ++I hope I could help tho 🤪

February 20, 2021

It has been almost four years since I graduated from high school. I don't like my high school life because I felt pressured and it was boring. I also suffered from something(可以具体一点 it would be more appropriate to describe the thing more detail) I hope it will never happen again. Fortunately, I meet a lot of brilliant teachers and good friends in my college school. In a nutshell, I love my college school life.

有些地方一些詞語多餘，可以省略。看見你嘗試用不同tenses是好事，但要注意，有些地方語法錯了。加油，可以私信交流英語。😉

February 20, 2021

Nice! Well done, keep up the good work 😋💪🏻

February 20, 2021

It's been almost for four years since I've graduated from my high school. I do not (don't) like my high school's life because I felt much pressure and boredom. I also suffered something, about that, I hoped that it never happen again.Fortunately, I've met a lot of brilliant teachers and some good friends in my college school.In short, I love my college school life.

February 20, 2021

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