Kseniia
The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. ______________________________ PARAGRAPH I To begin with, researchers and scientists turn to technologies to explore Universe, human body or physical phenomena. They do not need gathering information into tones of paper. All of them can observe the newest studies and articles in short time and share their examines's results through net. Indeed, the access to scientist data have promoted world scholar's union. For example, the entire world has known about the COVID-19 vaccine in several days after its discovering resulting in help thousands doctors and billion people.
Feb 20, 2021 7:12 PM
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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. ______________________________ PARAGRAPH I To begin with, researchers and scientists can use the internet to explore the universe, the human body or physical phenomena. They do not need to gather information into tons of paper. All of them can find and read the newest studies and articles quickly and share the results of their experiments through the net. Indeed, access to scientific data have promoted the union? (do you mean "cooperation?" _among the world's scholars, For example, the entire world found out about the COVID-19 vaccine in several days after its discovery, resulting in help for thousands of doctors and billions of people.
don't use "technologies" -- use "the internet" because technologies has many more meanings, and the question specifically talks about the internet. Your example doesn't fit your statement. You talk about scientists working together (at least I think you do). Then your example should be about that, not about people finding out about it. For example, "With shared data about COVID-19, scientists were able to work more quickly to create a vaccine to fight the virus. "
Feb 20, 2021 8:18 PM
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Kseniia
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