Kseniia
The first person who came to my mind is local artist, which, unfortunately, is no longer with us. His name was Rafael, but he was better known as Rafo. He painted in the style impressionism and post-impressionism and was esteemed person beloved by his friends, relatives, fans and students. Rafo devoted his life to art and teaching for betterment of his students. If my memory serves me right, I met him when I was 16 and I vividly remember our interlocutions on long evenings in his workshop. He possessed a very charming personality and was a great mentor I turned to for advice. He was my friend, my inspiration and worth person. A week ago I was near his workshop, where is the banner with his portrait and realized how much I miss him.
Feb 22, 2021 6:30 AM
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The first person who came to my mind is a local artist, who, unfortunately, is no longer with us. His name was Rafael, but he was better known as Rafo. He painted in both the impressionist and post-impressionist styles and was an esteemed person beloved by his friends, relatives, fans and students. Rafo devoted his life to art and teaching to help his students improve. If my memory serves me right, I first met him when I was 16 and I vividly remember our conversations during long evenings in his workshop. He possessed a very charming personality and was a great mentor I turned to for advice. He was my friend, my inspiration and a hero to me (not sure what you mean by 'worth person'). A week ago I was near his workshop, where there is a banner with his portrait and I realized how much I miss him.
Good stuff. Is this for speaking? Don't use over complicated words like interlocutions.
February 22, 2021
The first person who came to my mind is local artist, which, unfortunately, is no longer with us. His name was Rafael, but he was better known as Rafo. He painted in the style impressionism and post-impressionism and was esteemed person beloved by his friends, relatives, fans and students. Rafo devoted his life to art and teaching for betterment of his students. If my memory serves me right, I met him when I was 16 and I vividly remember our interlocutions on long evenings in his workshop. He possessed a very charming personality and was a great mentor I turned to for advice. He was my friend, my inspiration and worth person. A week ago I was near his workshop, where is the banner with his portrait and realized how much I miss him.
I really liked every single word that you wrote
February 22, 2021
The first person who came to my mind is local artist, which, unfortunately, is no longer with us. His name was Rafael, but he was better known as Rafo. He painted in the style impressionism and post-impressionism and was esteemed person beloved by his friends, relatives, fans and students. Rafo devoted his life to art and teaching for betterment of his students. If my memory serves me right, I met him when I was 16 and I vividly remember our interlocutions on long evenings in his workshop. He possessed a very charming personality and was a great mentor I turned to for advice. He was my friend, my inspiration and worth person. A week ago I was near his workshop, where is the banner with his portrait and realized how much I miss him.
great job
February 22, 2021
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