Celine
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In my dreams last night, I was dreaming about a big family dinner. I wanted to see my family and enjoyed the time that we spend together. During the dream, i invited all of them to eat something easy to cook. When I woke up today, I really wanted to see them. So now I'm preparing the dinner and they will come tomorrow to enjoy this meal.
Mar 4, 2021 6:00 PM
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In my dreams last night, I [was dreaming] dreamt about a big family dinner. I wanted to see my family and enjoy the time (that) we spend together. During/In the dream, I invited all of them to eat something easy to cook. When I woke up today, I really wanted to see them. So now I'm preparing the dinner and they will come tomorrow to enjoy this/the meal.
March 4, 2021
Last night I dreamt about a big family dinner. I wanted to see my family and enjoy spending some time together. [During the dream,]* I invited all of them to eat something easy to cook. When I woke up today, I really wanted to see them. So now I'm preparing the dinner and they will come tomorrow to enjoy this meal.
* You could delete this bit as it’s clear you’re still talking about the dream. I think it’d sound better that way. “Invited” is a little ambiguous because it could mean either of the following: (1) You invited them to come to your home and eat something which was simple to cook. (2) When they were at your home, you suggested to them that they eat something that was easy to cook (which sounds a bit odd - it’s like you haven’t prepared anything so they have to decide what to eat!). I think you mean (1), and you could make this clearer by saying “I invited all of them OVER to eat something easy to cook.” (or “... to eat something simple”). If you invite someone over, it means you invite them to come to your home. I hope that helps in some way!
March 4, 2021
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