Wendy
1. I'm Peruvian 2. Currently I'm doing my intership in a construction company working 7h per day. 3. I have a pet, well it is not really mine but i love her as mine. 4. My father is a police retired and my mother is a seller. 5. I am used to waking up at 5:00am. 6. My favourite national food is Carapulcra and my favourite foreigner is Quesadillas from Mexico. 7. I've never learnt how to play an instrument. It's my frustrated dream. 8. I have 3 siblings: 2 brothers and 1 sister. One of my brothers is actually my twin. We have a lot of hobbies in common and trust in each other our secrets. 9. I would like to dance in public. Actually I'm terible lol, but I enjoy it so much! 10. I'm interested in learn more about interior design.
Jun 13, 2021 3:05 PM
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All the corrections made by Kenny are perfect, but there are just two things I would like to add: 3. I have a pet, well it is not really mine, but I love her as she were mine. (capital I) and 4. ....my mother is a sales assistant. That's all. Hope it helps. Good luck :-)
June 13, 2021
1. I'm Peruvian 2. Currently I'm doing my internship in a construction company working 7h per day. 3. I have a pet, well it is not really mine but i love her as if she were mine. 4. My father is a retired police officer and my mother is a sales woman. 5. I am used to waking up at 5:00am. Better: I usually wake up at 5 am. 6. My favourite national food is Carapulcra and my favourite foreign food is Quesadillas from Mexico. 7. I've never learnt how to play an instrument. It's a source of frustration. 8. I have 3 siblings: 2 brothers and 1 sister. One of my brothers is actually my twin brother. We have a lot of hobbies in common and tell each other our secrets. 9. I would like to dance in public. Actually, I'm terrible at dancing, lol, but I enjoy it so much! 10. I'm interested in learning more about interior design.
Well done, I can tell that you sometimes translate literally from Spanish, but I could understand everything. Do you really wake up at 5 am??? Good luck with your English and your internship!
June 13, 2021
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