Isabel
The sweetest thing that I have seen is from my dad, he gave fifty roses to my mom in her birthday, one for each year of her life.
Jun 17, 2021 4:11 AM
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The sweetest thing that I have seen is from my dad, he gave fifty roses to my mom in her birthday, one for each year of her life.
Hi Isabel, I agree with Kris and Arun. Another variation on tihs could be " The sweetest gesture that I have ever witnessed was my dad presenting my mom with 50 roses on her birthday; each rose representing one year of her life. ( this is just another suggestion in case you would like it to be more descriptive, colourful and articulate.
June 17, 2021
The sweetest thing that I have seen is from my dad. He gave fifty roses to my mom on her birthday, one for each year of her life. Really sweet..
June 17, 2021
The sweetest thing that I have seen is from my dad. He gave fifty roses to my mom on her birthday, one for each year of her life.
Very well written! Your dad sounds romantic, what a nice story :). Your version is not wrong, but it may be more natural to say "He gave my mom fifty roses on her birthday, one for each year of her life." Good luck!
June 17, 2021
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