malico
I have two adorable nieces . Younger girl is 6 years and the other one is 9. 6 years girl made me a phone call yesterday with crying. According to her story, she took an emergency drill at the elementary school and watching some earthquake videos that was too scary for her . When she came home, there was nobody in her house and she remembered the content of videos for disastor. She could not stand the situation that she had to stay her house alone at the moment. And she said ' I'm so scared if earthquake happnen now '. So we were talking in a phone until she calm down and her mother came home.
Jan 20, 2021 12:36 PM
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I have two adorable nieces . Younger girl is 6 years and the other one is 9. 6 years girl made me a phone call yesterday with crying. According to her story, she took an emergency drill at the elementary school and watching some earthquake videos that was too scary for her . When she came home, there was nobody in her house and she remembered the content of videos for disastor. She could not stand the situation that she had to stay her house alone at the moment. And she said ' I'm so scared if earthquake happnen now '. So we were talking in a phone until she calm down and her mother came home.hello .it very nice 🙂 spending time with your family it help you mentally and spiritually
January 23, 2021
I have two adorable nieces. The younger girl is 6 years old, while the other one is 9. When the 6-year-old girl called me on the phone yesterday, she was crying. According to her, as she explained through her sobs, she had participated in an emergency drill at the elementary school and some scenes in the earthquake video that she had watched were simply too scary for her. As a result, when she returned home, and there was nobody there, her mind naturally remembered the disasters shown in the school video. Frightened and alone, she simply could not stand being by herself at that moment and needed to talk with someone. She told me “I'm so scared of an earthquake happening right now!” To help her to calm down, to keep her company, and to let her know that everything was going to be okay, I simply talked with her on the phone until her mother came home.
Hi, Malico. Good job! Whatever changes I made were merely to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. I hope that this helps you.
January 23, 2021
I have two adorable nieces . Younger girl is 6 years and the other one is 9. 6 years girl made me a phone call yesterday with crying. According to her story, she took an emergency drill at the elementary school and watching some earthquake videos that was too scary for her . When she came home, there was nobody in her house and she remembered the content of videos for disastor. She could not stand the situation that she had to stay her house alone at the moment. And she said ' I'm so scared if earthquake happnen now '. So we were talking in a phone until she calm down and her mother came home.wow oh you have a bless family it nice spending time with them
January 23, 2021
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