Cinthya
Yesterday was a busy and tired day but It also was very productive. I was studying Italian in the morning and made me my breakfast, then I went to work. At work I finished all my work to do, so I took adventage of it and studied Franch grammar. After work and my dinner, I was listening a podcast and music French, while I was doing that I was cleaning my home, I took clothes and shoes I don’t use anymore. Tomorrow at work it will be a recolection of shoes with the intection to give them to kids and young people of low resources, so I put a few shoes in my car for bring them tomorrow. I also made more space in my room, because you know, sometimes we have things that don’t need or don’t use anymore. Besides, I will do some changes to my room. At night I studied English but I feel asleep with the lights on, that’s just happens when I am very, very tired like yesterday. I actually don’t like to sleep with lights on but after a few time sleeping I woke up to get off the lighths and return to sleep.
Feb 26, 2021 4:03 PM
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Yesterday was a busy and tiring day but it also was very productive. I was studying Italian in the morning and made my breakfast before I went to work. At work I finished all my outstanding work , so I took advantage of the spare time to study Franch grammar. After work and my dinner, I was listening to a podcast and French music while I was cleaning my home. I took clothes and shoes I don’t use anymore and put them in my car to take to work tomorrow as there will be a collection of shoes and clothes to give to kids and young people in need. I also made more space in my room, because you know, sometimes we have things that we don’t need or don’t use anymore. Besides, I will do some changes to my room. At night I studied English but I fell asleep with the lights on. That’s what happens when I am very, very tired like yesterday. I actually don’t like to sleep with lights on but after a while sleeping, I woke up to turn off the lights and return to sleep.
Well Done! I changed more than I needed to . You had no commas with “but” .... much better.
February 26, 2021
Yesterday was a busy and tiring day but It was also very productive. I studied Italian in the morning and made my breakfast, then I went to work. [“studied Italian” because it was an action you completed :)] At work I finished all the work I had to do, so I took advantage of it [technically ok, but a little weird — I would maybe say “took advantage of the extra time] and studied Franch grammar. After work and my dinner, I listened to a podcast and French music. While I was doing that, I cleaned my home and collected [doesn’t have to be “collected,” but “took” doesn’t work — took them where? :)] clothes and shoes I don’t use anymore. Tomorrow at work they are collecting shoes with the intention to give them to kids and young people with low resources, so I put a few shoes in my car to bring to them tomorrow. I also made more space in my room, because you know, sometimes we have things that we don’t need or don’t use anymore. Besides, I‘m going to make some changes to my room. At night I studied English but I feel asleep with the lights on, that’s just what happens when I am very, very tired like yesterday. I actually don’t like to sleep with lights on but after a little while I woke up to get off the lights and go back to sleep. [“return” works too, it sounds very poetic! Usually I would say “go to sleep”]
what a full day!!
February 26, 2021
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