Amanda
Today is the first day in Chinese lunar calendar .because of the virus I can’t go back to my hometown to see my parents. In the morning I called my parents on wechat video call .After breakfast I go to play basketball ,I met a 12 years old boy .we played together,The kid laugh at my skill .we talked and played .It’s so fun. In the evening I study english with italki teacher kaela,a very fabulous girl ,she gave me an amazing class and corrected all my mistake about the sentences.It’s a real full day。
Feb 12, 2021 12:46 PM
Corrections · 2
Today is the first day in Chinese lunar calendar. Because of the virus, I can’t go back to my hometown to see my parents. In the morning, I called my parents on a wechat video call. After breakfast, I played basketball and met a 12 year old boy. We played together, and the kid laughed at my skill. We talked and played. It was so fun. In the evening, I studied English with my italki teacher Kaela, a very fabulous lady. She gave me an amazing class and corrected all my mistakes in my sentences. It was a real fulfilling day.
For your last sentence, "a real full day" works, but sounds a little unnatural. You can say "It was a real fulfilling day." or "It was a really busy day." I would go with fulfilling because it sounds like a good day. Great job! You only made some small mistakes, Kaela must be a great teacher!
Feb 12, 2021 1:12 PM
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Amanda
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
Learning Language
English