Juanita Barbosa
The chart illustrates the change in global sales of three products ( Games software, DVD/Video and CDs) over the years 2001 to 2001, the units are measure in billions Overall the most sold were CDs over the years 2000 to 2003, in contrast the least sold were Games software, over these years Games software and DVD/video increased their sales , however, CDs decreased slightly. It’s clear that CDs were the highest during the years 2000 to 2003, from the beginning with just over 32 billions, in contrast the lowest sells were games software with approximatly 15 billions in 2000, then DVD/video and Games software increased over the years, on the other hand CDs had a sligh decrease their sales from 2000 to 2002, to 2000 it was approximately 32 billions but then in 2001 decrease 1 or 2 billions, the next year (2002) CDs showed the same drop, and then this product remained stable between 2002 and 2003. Games software had an rise of just under 5 billions, in contrast DVD/video showed a dramatic increase for about 10 billions between 2000 to 2003.
Feb 14, 2021 5:17 AM
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The chart illustrates the change in global sales of three products ( Games software, DVD/Video and CDs) over the years 2001 to 2001, the units are measure in billions Overall the most sold were CDs over the years 2000 to 2003, in contrast the least sold were Games software, over these years Games software and DVD/video increased their sales , however, CDs decreased slightly. It’s clear that CDs were the highest during the years 2000 to 2003, from the beginning with just over 32 billions, in contrast the lowest sells were games software with approximatly 15 billions in 2000, then DVD/video and Games software increased over the years, on the other hand CDs had a sligh decrease their sales from 2000 to 2002, to 2000 it was approximately 32 billions but then in 2001 decrease 1 or 2 billions, the next year (2002) CDs showed the same drop, and then this product remained stable between 2002 and 2003. Games software had an rise of just under 5 billions, in contrast DVD/video showed a dramatic increase for about 10 billions between 2000 to 2003.
The chart illustrates the change in global sales of three products (Games software, DVD/Video, and CDs) over the years 2001 to 2001. The units are measured in billions.  Overall, the most sold were CDs over the years 2000 to 2003. In contrast, the least sold were Games software. Over these years, Games software and DVD/video increased their sales. However, CDs decreased slightly. It’s clear that CDs were the highest during the years 2000 to 2003, with just over 32 billions.  In contrast, the lowest sales were Games software, with approximately 15 billions in 2000.  Then, DVD/video and Games software increased over the years.  On the other hand,  CDs had a slight decrease in their sales from 2000 to 2002.  In 2000, it was approximately 32 billions. But then in 2001, it decreased 1 or 2 billions.  The next year (2002), CDs showed the same drop and remained stable between 2002 and 2003. Games software had a rise of just under 5 billions. In contrast, DVD/video showed a dramatic increase of about 10 billions between 2000 to 2003.
Feb 14, 2021 2:21 PM
The chart illustrates the change in global sales of three products ( Games software, DVD/Video and CDs) over the years 2001 to 2001. The units are measured in billions. Overall CDs sold the most over the years 2000 to 2003. In contrast, Games software sold the least. Over these years Games software and DVD/video increased their sales, however, CDs decreased slightly. It’s clear that CDs were the highest during the years 2000 to 2003, from the beginning with just over 32 billion In contrast, the lowest sales were games software with approximately 15 billion in 2000. DVD/video and Games software increased over the years. On the other hand, CDs had a slight decrease in their sales from 2000 to 2002. Until 2000 it was approximately 32 billion, but then in 2001 it decreased 1 or 2 billion. The next year (2002), CDs showed the same drop, and then the product remained stable between 2002 and 2003. Games software had a rise of just under 5 billion. In contrast, DVD/video showed a dramatic increase for about 10 billion between 2000 to 2003.
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Feb 14, 2021 12:07 PM
The chart illustrates the change in global sales of three products ( Games software, DVD/Video and CDs) over the years 2001 to 2001, the units are measure in billions Overall the most sold were CDs over the years 2000 to 2003, in contrast the least sold were Games software, over these years Games software and DVD/video increased their sales , however, CDs decreased slightly. It’s clear that CDs were the highest during the years 2000 to 2003, from the beginning with just over 32 billions, in contrast the lowest sells were games software with approximatly 15 billions in 2000, then DVD/video and Games software increased over the years, on the other hand CDs had a sligh decrease their sales from 2000 to 2002, to 2000 it was approximately 32 billions but then in 2001 decrease 1 or 2 billions, the next year (2002) CDs showed the same drop, and then this product remained stable between 2002 and 2003. Games software had an rise of just under 5 billions, in contrast DVD/video showed a dramatic increase for about 10 billions between 2000 to 2003. Also your third paragraph is one sentence! Can you write your body paragraphs in a better way?
Feb 14, 2021 8:36 AM
The chart illustrates the change in global sales of three products ( Games software, DVD/Video and CDs) over the years 2001 to 2001, the units are measure in billions Overall the most sold were CDs over the years 2000 to 2003, in contrast the least sold were Games software, over these years Games software and DVD/video increased their sales , however, CDs decreased slightly. It’s clear that CDs were the highest during the years 2000 to 2003, from the beginning with just over 32 billions, in contrast the lowest sells were games software with approximatly 15 billions in 2000, then DVD/video and Games software increased over the years, on the other hand CDs had a sligh decrease their sales from 2000 to 2002, to 2000 it was approximately 32 billions but then in 2001 decrease 1 or 2 billions, the next year (2002) CDs showed the same drop, and then this product remained stable between 2002 and 2003. Games software had an rise of just under 5 billions, in contrast DVD/video showed a dramatic increase for about 10 billions between 2000 to 2003. Generally this is pretty good. Before I comment in detail, think about whether you can draw the chart from the information given. I think you are missing two numbers you should include.
Feb 14, 2021 8:29 AM
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Juanita Barbosa
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English, French, Spanish
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English, French