I am form Catalonia, Spain. I live in small city near Barcelona. I love the place where I live, I have whatever I want! In front of my house there is the beach and I love it, specially in summer. Nea

Andrea Ballesta

I am form Catalonia, Spain. I live in small city near Barcelona. I love the place where I live, I have whatever I want! In front of my house there is the beach and I love it, specially in summer. Nearly there are a lot of parks and some coffee shops where you can spend a good time with your friends. We have only one discotheque and I think it is small because there are a lot of teenagers in my town! Also there are a shopping center so I can buy everything I need. To sum up, my town is fantastic. It’s familiar and we have all the structures which we need.

Feb 14, 2021 2:19 PM

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I am from Catalonia, Spain. I live in small city near Barcelona. I love the place where I live, I have everything I want! In front of my house there is the beach and I love it, specially in summer. Nearby there are a lot of parks and some coffee shops where you can have a good time with friends. We have only one discotheque and I think it is small because there are a lot of teenagers in my town! Also there is a shopping center so I can buy everything I need. To sum up, my town is fantastic. It’s familiar and we have all the amenities which we need.

Molt bon treball! Escrius molt bé i uses frases coloquiales com ‘to sum up’ efectivamente. Jo sòc parlant natiu de l’angles i parlo castellà també. El últim any, vaig començar a aprendre català, i m’agradaria molt poder parlar i practicar amb tu, si et va bé! Puc ajudar-te amb el teu angles en la medida que vulguis, clar. Deixa’m saber si això et sons bé i fins aviat!

February 15, 2021

I am from Catalonia, Spain. I live in small city near Barcelona. I love the place where I live, I have everything I want! In front of my house there is the beach and I love it, especially in summer. There are a lot of parks and some coffee shops where you can have a good time with your friends. We have only one nightclub and I think it is small because there are a lot of teenagers in my town! Also there are a shopping center so I can buy everything I need. To sum up, my town is fantastic. It’s familiar and we have everything we need.

February 14, 2021

I am form Catalonia, Spain. I live in a small city near Barcelona. I love the place where I live. I have whatever I want! In front of my house there is a beach, and I love it, especially in summer. There are a lot of parks and some coffee shops where you can spend a good time with your friends nearby. We have only one discotheque, and I think it is small because there are a lot of teenagers in my town! Also, there is a shopping center, so I can buy everything I need. To sum up, my town is fantastic. It’s familiar, and we have all the structures we need.

En general la redacción está bien y las ideas se entienden sin dificultad, sin embargo algunas elecciones de palabras y orden de oración me hacen ver que aún estás pensando en catalán/español. ¿A qué te refieres con "it's familiar" y con "structures"? Esa es la única parte que suena un poco extraña. Si pules esos errores estarás hablando inglés a la perfección en muy poco tiempo, sigue así!

February 14, 2021

I am from Catalonia, Spain. I live in a small city near Barcelona. I love the place where I live, I have whatever I want! In front of my house there is the beach and I love it, especially in summer. Near there are a lot of parks and some coffee shops where you can have a good time with your friends. We have only one discotheque and I think it is small because there are a lot of teenagers in my town! Also there is a shopping center so I can buy everything I need. To sum up, my town is fantastic. It’s familiar and we have all the structures which we need.

February 14, 2021

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