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Please correct my sentence if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. 2/15 Today, I had a lot of to do so I’m tired. in the morning, I got up at 8am. It was pouring outside so I was supposed to take a walk. then, I was watching English stuff on YouTube so that I would learn English. My father called me out of the blue. I something urgent came up so I left home as soon as I got ready. Anyways, I just got back right now. I had a long day today so I’ll go to bed early than usual. I’m done for today.
Feb 15, 2021 10:20 AM
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Please correct my sentence if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. sentences 2/15 Today, I had a lot of to do so I’m tired. in the morning, I got up at 8am. It was pouring outside so I was supposed to take a walk. This part doesn't make sense. Did you mean; I was supposed to take a walk but it was pouring (so you had to change your plans?) then, I was watching English stuff on YouTube so that I would learn English. My father called me out of the blue. I something urgent came up so I left home as soon as I got ready. "something urgent" is the subject here, you need to delete I. Anyways, I just got back right now. Choose one of just and right. I had a long day today so I’ll go to bed early than usual. earlier I’m done for today.
Feb 15, 2021 10:57 AM
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Language Skills
English, Japanese
Learning Language
English