Cinthya
USING CONNECTORS ☆According to my experience, it's better if you wake up early to take the road and drive to the city. ☆Actually, I am studying for my exam of tomorrow. ☆After all, I didn't accept the job offer. ☆And more specifically she was a music iconic. ☆And one more thing, you should wash the dishes. ☆And to make matters worse, I lost my car keys and I couldn't find them. ☆And what's more, you didn't help us to finish the project. ☆As far as I am concerned, you both will go because I can do it without you. ☆As far I know, the party starts at 8:00 p.m. ☆As I see it, he wont walk again. ☆As they say, I am all ears. ☆As you already know, the teacher changed the test date for next week. ☆Before we finish, we have to cut it carefully. ☆Besides that, I play basketball. ☆Between you and I, there is something special.
Feb 16, 2021 3:04 AM
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USING CONNECTORS ☆Based on my experience, it's better if you wake up early to drive to the city. ☆Actually, I am studying for tomorrow’s exam. ☆After all, I didn't accept the job offer. ☆And more specifically, she was a music icon. ☆And one more thing, you should wash the dishes. ☆And to make matters worse, I lost my car keys and couldn't find them. ☆And what's more, you didn't help us to finish the project. ☆As far as I am concerned, you both can go because I can do it without you. ☆As far I know, the party starts at 8:00 p.m. ☆As I see it, he won’t walk again. ☆As they say, I am all ears. ☆As you already know, the teacher changed the test date for next week. ☆Before we finish, we have to cut it carefully. ☆Besides that, I play basketball. ☆Between you and I, there is something special.
Awesome writing! Some of my changes are just to use less words.
Feb 16, 2021 9:33 PM
USING CONNECTORS ☆According to my experience, it's better if you wake up early to get on the road and drive to the city. ☆Actually, I am studying for my exam of tomorrow. ☆After all, I didn't accept the job offer. ☆And more specifically, she was a music iconic. ☆And one more thing, you should wash the dishes. ☆And to make matters worse, I lost my car keys, and I couldn't find them. ☆And what's more, you didn't help us to finish the project. ☆As far as I am concerned, you both will go because I can do it without you. ☆As far I know, the party starts at 8:00 p.m. ☆As I see it, he won’t walk again. ☆As they say, I am all ears. ☆As you already know, the teacher changed the test date for next week. ☆Before we finish, we have to cut it carefully. ☆Besides that, I play basketball. ☆Between you and I, there is something special.
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Feb 16, 2021 3:13 AM
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Cinthya
Language Skills
English, French, Italian, Spanish
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English, French, Italian