Olga Sapozhnikova
Would you correct this text for me, please? 365 days of writing prompts February 15 Proud When was the last time someone told you they were proud of you? Last week I had annual certification on my work. Actually, it is a big event like an interview with the head of the department and local supervisor. The result of this interview impact salary increase. For me, it was fifteen minutes conversation with my supervisor and the main topic was 'Am I fine? Am I satisfy with my job?' She said that the company is proud of me and hope I would work next year. The funniest moment is that sometimes I hate my job! #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
Feb 16, 2021 4:30 PM
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Would you correct this text for me, please? 365 days of writing prompts February 15 Proud When was the last time someone told you that they were proud of you? Last week I had annual review on my work. Actually, it is a big event, involving an interview with the head of the department and my local supervisor. The result of this interview impacts my salary increase. For me, it was a fifteen minutes conversation with my supervisor and the main topics were; 'Am I fine? Am I satisfied with my job?' She said that the company is proud of me and they hope that I will work there next year. The funniest point is that sometimes I hate my job! #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
February 17, 2021
Would you correct this text for me please? 365 days of writing prompts: February 15! When was the last time someone told you they were proud of you? Last week I had annual certification on my work. Actually, it is a big event like an interview with the head of the department and local supervisor. The result of this interview impact salary increase. For me, it was a fifteen- minute conversation with my supervisor and the main topic was 'Am I fine?' 'Am I satisfied with my job?' She said that the company is proud of me and hope I would continue working with them in the next year. The funniest moment is that sometimes I hate my job! #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
February 16, 2021
Would you correct this text for me, please? 365 days of writing prompts February 15 Proud When was the last time someone told you they were proud of you? Last week I had an annual certification (obs: if annual certification isn't the actual name, i would recommend you to say "annual check-up" instead) on my work. Actually, it is a big event. It's like an interview with the head of the department and/or local supervisor. The result of this interview impacts salary raises. For me, it was a fifteen minute conversation with my supervisor and the main topic was 'Am I fine? Am I satisfied with my job?' She said that the company is proud of me and hopes that I would keep working next year. The funniest thing is that, sometimes, I hate my job! #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
February 16, 2021
When was the last time someone told you they were proud of you? Last week, I had my annual evaluation (I think "evaluation" is a better choice than certification) from my work. For my evaluation, I talked to and received feedback from my local supervisor and the department head. This was an important event for me and meant a lot to me to receive a favorable evaluation as it is critical (OR needed) to get my salary increase (OR simply needed to get a salary increase). The conversation with my supervisor took only fifteen minutes and it revolved mainly around how I was doing at work and how satisfied I was with my job. She told me that the company is proud of me and she hopes to see me working there next year. The strange but funny thing about what she said is that at times, I hate my job and would love to tell them, take this job and shove it! #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
Not sure if this is what you wanted but, I took the liberty of adding an American (and my) mindset to your essay in addition to grammatical correction. Hopefully, it's good enough for what you need. Keep on writing! 😁👍😁
February 17, 2021
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