After a long week of horrible weather’s down tons of snow fallings, it’s started to getting better and hotter! for the first time since the year started ,i haven’t felt like that i have just open my f

Rami

After a long week of horrible weather’s down tons of snow fallings, it’s started to getting better and hotter! for the first time since the year started ,i haven’t felt like that i have just open my freezer , when i open my front door. pls correct my mistakes.

Feb 16, 2021 8:52 PM

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After a long week of horrible weather including tons of snow, it’s started to get better and warmer! For the first time since the year started , I haven’t felt like that I have just open my freezer , when I open my front door. pls correct my mistakes.

Spring can't come too soon

February 16, 2021

Thank you for talking your time to go through my lines and correct them.

February 17, 2021

After a long week of horrible weather and tons of snow falling, it’s started to get better and warmer! For the first time since the year started, I haven’t felt / I didn’t feel like I just opened my freezer when I open my front door.

It was really good to begin with! I hope this helped a little!

February 16, 2021

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