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Over five p.m., my older son comes home from his after-school activity class. He like it very much and enjoy a lot of activities every day, because there is no kids who play with him around my house. The town we live now has many old people and a few young ages, it’s so-called Japanese aging society. There are some disadvantages here , but we can raise our children freely, without any stress. I love this town!
Feb 18, 2021 11:39 AM
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Around 5 p.m. , my older son comes home from his after-school activities. He likes it very much and enjoys a lot of activities every day especially because there are no kids who can play with him in the neighborhood. Currently, the town we live in has a lot of old people and a few young ones , it’s a so-called Japanese aging society. There are some advantages though, we can raise our children freely, without any stress. I love this town!
Excellent , grammar structure. There are just some words that are better to help explain your sentence.
February 18, 2021
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