hadjer
In my free time, I really love dancing. I have a online dance course every Saturday afternoon. I started dancing when I was Child. I have been dancing almost all traditional Algerian dances types. And my Mexican friend got me into latin dance. When we were practicing together. I couldn't play the moves at first because it was so hard. But now I enjoy it especially when I learn new one. It's really exciting and gives me positive energy. Dance after dance my body believe freedom more and more. This activity inspired me to fly away with my thoughts following my body steps.
Feb 18, 2021 7:58 PM
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In my free time, I really love dancing. I take an online dance course every Saturday afternoon. I started dancing when I was a child and have danced almost all traditional Algerian dances styles. My Mexican friend got me into latin dance. When we were practicing together, I couldn't do the moves at first because it was so hard. But now I enjoy it, especially when I learn new moves. It's really exciting and gives me positive energy. Dance after dance, I feel more and more free. This activity has inspired me to fly away with my thoughts following my body’s movements.
This is a lovely written passage and you’ve written quite well. The last couple of sentences were a little confusing so I hope my correction expresses what you intended. :)
Feb 19, 2021 12:29 AM
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hadjer
Language Skills
Arabic, English, French, Italian
Learning Language
English