jai
Please listen and provide feedback on my speech.. Thanks in advance
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Jan 29, 2022 5:20 PM
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Please listen and provide feedback on my speech.. Thanks in advance
Hi Jai, this is a very good speech. My feedback is that for the first sentence you could say ‘ It was a beautiful morning today and it is now afternoon. ‘ . You could also say “…I was a bit hesitant and shy to speak among a group of people….” Your grammar in this speech is otherwise excellent.
Jan 29, 2022 5:31 PM
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