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Writing Exercise 383 – EATING! EATING! EATING! Today is the first day of the Chinese Lunar New Year. It is cold and rainy outside. I’d rather stay home than go out to celebrate the Spring Festival. There is not much thing to do while staying home. I have been eating snacks or homemade traditional spring festival food since I woke up. Although I don’t feel hungry, I just want to eat something. I felt like I was indulging myself. Fortunately, I hardly eat junk food on normal days and I exercise regularly. Therefore, I don’t worry that I will gain a lot of weight during this New Year holiday.

Feb 1, 2022 7:47 AM

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Writing Exercise 383 – EATING! EATING! EATING! Today is the first day of the Chinese Lunar New Year. It is cold and rainy outside. I’d rather stay home than go out to celebrate the Spring Festival. There is not much to do while staying home. I have been eating snacks or homemade traditional spring festival food since I woke up. Even though I didn’t feel hungry, I just wanted to eat something. I felt like indulging myself. Fortunately, I hardly eat junk food on normal days and I exercise regularly. Therefore, I'm not worried that I will gain a lot of weight during this New Year holiday.

Hi, this version assumes that you've just stopped eating

Feb 1, 2022 8:35 AM

Writing Exercise 383 – EATING! EATING! EATING! Today is the first day of the Chinese Lunar New Year. It is cold and rainy outside. I’d rather stay home than go out to celebrate the Spring Festival. There is not much to do at home. I have been eating snacks and homemade traditional spring festival food since I woke up. Even though I don’t feel hungry, I just want to eat something. I feel like indulging myself. Fortunately, I hardly eat junk food on normal days and I exercise regularly. Therefore, I'm not worried that I will gain a lot of weight during this New Year holiday.

Hi, happy new year! I've assumed that you haven't stopped eating yet? If you have, then some of the verb tenses need to changing.

Feb 1, 2022 8:06 AM

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