Carolyn
Please kindly help me to correct the following story I wrote. Thank you Story title:The two ants Once upon a time, there were two ants. One was living in the city and another was living in the country.They were good friends. One day, the country ant invited the city ant to his house for having a meal together. “ I have come so far for many days and now I am starving. I want to eat a lot of delicious food.”said the city ant. “I am afraid that I only have a little water and fruit in my house.”said the country ant. “In this case..let’s go to my house in the city! I have many many good food to eat in my refrigerator. There are dried crickets, grasshoppers run over by cars ,cockroaches hit by slippers and a mouthful of ice cream which dropped down accidentally by a kid.” said the city ant. “Wait! Did you just say you have cockroaches which are very juicy and tasty just like a chicken taste ?”said the country ant. “Yes, I did. The cockroaches living in our city are specially big and fat; furthermore, they all are juicy. I usually see them doing work out by flying in the house. Oh, you just remind me of a leg of cockroaches left in my refrigerator. I will leave it to you.” Said the city ant. “I really appreciate it. Wow, I can’t wait to eat them. I got my mouthwatering now. I haven’t been to city once and please take me to your city. I would like to have an eye-opening experience.”said the country ant. Then,the two ants hit the road and arrived at city ant’s house.While going into the house, they suddenly saw a boy running over to them,and tried to use his thumb and forefinger to catch them.Moreover, the boy wanted to put them in his toy’s car. The two ants were frightened to death and got in hurry to run into a little hole on the walls. “It was just a little dangerous but there are still a lot of good food to eat in the city “ said the city ant. “The city is too dangerous for me. Although I only have a little water and fruit,but I am happy in the country”
Feb 2, 2022 9:54 AM
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Please kindly help me to correct the following story I wrote. Thank you Story title:The two ants Once upon a time, there were two ants. One was living in the city and another was living in the country.They were good friends. One day, the country ant invited the city ant to his house a meal together. “ I have come so far for many days and now I am starving. I want to eat a lot of delicious food.”said the city ant. “I am afraid that I only have a little water and fruit in my house.”said the country ant. “In this case..let’s go to my house in the city! I have many many good food to eat in my refrigerator. There are dried crickets, grasshoppers run over by cars ,cockroaches hit by slippers and a mouthful of ice cream which dropped down accidentally by a kid.” said the city ant. “Wait! Did you just say you have cockroaches which are very juicy and tasty just like a chicken taste ?”said the country ant. “Yes, I did. The cockroaches living in our city are specially big and fat; furthermore, they all are juicy. I usually see them doing work out by flying in the house. Oh, you just remind me of a leg of cockroaches left in my refrigerator. I will leave it to you.” Said the city ant. “I really appreciate it. Wow, I can’t wait to eat them. I got my mouthwatering now. I haven’t been to city once and please take me to your city. I would like to have an eye-opening experience.”said the country ant. Then,the two ants hit the road and arrived at city ant’s house.While going into the house, they suddenly saw a boy running over to them,and tried to use his thumb and forefinger to catch them.Moreover, the boy wanted to put them in his toy’s car. The two ants were frightened to death and got in hurry to run into a little hole on the walls. “It was just a little dangerous but there are still a lot of good food to eat in the city “ said the city ant. “The city is too dangerous for me. Although I only have a little water and fruit,but I am happy in the country”
TO HAVE a meal together. I have A LOT OF good food (or MUCH good food). ice cream DROPPED accidentally by a kid. ESPECIALLY big and fat. I usually see them doing A work out. you just REMINDED me of. MY MOUTH IS WATERING NOW. I HAVE NEVER BEEN TO THE CITY. in his TOY CAR. THEY HURRIEDLY RAN INTO A LITTLE HOLE IN THE WALL. there IS still a lot of good food
Feb 2, 2022 11:12 AM
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