Bells
There is a boy band from South Korea called Stray Kids. I like them because of their music and personality. Also they are one of my reasons why I want to learn English. They inspire me a lot. Fun fact!! They all can speak English really well, especially two of them are Australian. They have a really thick accent and It sounds beautiful. I didn’t even realise that I was gradually picking up their accent. Talking about personality, they are hard-working men. They know very well how the industry works. Even before I decided to be a part of this lovely family, I could see how big the potential they had. All members of Stray Kids are capable to write and produce songs. Also because of them I don’t want to give up on my dreams. They are so precious and I love them so much.
Feb 2, 2022 3:10 PM
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There is a boy band from South Korea called Stray Kids. I like them because of their music and personality. Also they are one of my reasons why I want to learn English. They inspire me a lot. Fun fact!! They all can speak English really well, especially two of them are Australian. They have a really thick accent and It sounds beautiful. I didn’t even realise that I was gradually picking up their accent. Talking about personality, they are hard-working men. They know very well how the industry works. Even before I decided to be a part of this lovely family, I could see how big the potential they had. All members of Stray Kids are capable to write and produce songs. Also because of them I don’t want to give up on my dreams. They are so precious and I love them so much.
Good Job, Bells 🥳.
Feb 2, 2022 3:18 PM
There is a boy band from South Korea called Stray Kids. I like them because of their music and personality. Also they are one of my reasons why I want to learn English. They inspire me a lot. Fun fact!! They all can speak English really well, especially two of them are Australian. They have a really thick accent and It sounds beautiful. I didn’t even realise that I was gradually picking up their accent. Talking about personality, they are hard-working men. They know very well how the industry works. Even before I decided to be a part of this lovely family, I could see how big the potential they had. All members of Stray Kids are capable to write and produce songs. Also because of them I don’t want to give up on my dreams. They are so precious and I love them so much.
Add a comma after “Also”. So: “Also,”.
Feb 2, 2022 3:17 PM
There is a boy band from South Korea called Stray Kids. I like them because of their music and personality. Also they are one of the reasons why I want to learn English. They inspire me a lot. Fun fact, they all speak English really well, especially the two that are Australian. They have a really thick accent and It sounds beautiful. I didn’t even realise that I was gradually picking up their accent. Talking about personality, they are hard-working men. They know how the industry works very well. Even before I decided to be a part of this lovely family, I could see how much potential they had. All members of Stray Kids are capable of writing and producing songs. Also, because of them I don’t want to give up on my dreams. They are so precious and I love them so much.
Feb 2, 2022 3:16 PM
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