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My family has four people:my parents,me and my sister.My dad is a generous,kind,and trustworthy man,he is the people who I respect most.My mother is skilled in cooking,she can make any dish as long as she want.What's more,she has the magic ability to turn my mess room into tidy room.My sister is nine years old,she learned many things,such as drawing,dancing,calligraphy and violin.That's amazing,isn't it?But she favorite thing is to do crafts,she has a pair of dexterous hands to make everything she wants.As for me,I'm a college student,and my major is english.So with the intention of improving my english ability, I came to italki.Nice to meet everyone here!
Feb 6, 2022 1:45 AM
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My family has (consist’s of) four people my parents,me and my sister. My dad is a generous, kind, and trustworthy man. He is the person I respect (the) most. My mother is skilled in cooking, she can make any dish as long as she want (she can make any dish as long as she puts her mind to it). What's more, she has the magic (magical) ability to turn my mess (messy) room into (a) tidy room (tidy environment). My sister is nine years old, she (has) learned many things such as drawing, dancing, calligraphy and violin. That's amazing,isn't it? But she (her) favorite thing to do (is) crafts, she has a pair of dexterous hands to make everything she wants. As for me, I'm a college student, and my major is english (English). With the intention of improving my english (English) ability, I came to italki (Italki). It’s Nice to meet all of you here!
Feb 15, 2022 11:37 PM
My family consists of four people: my parents, me and my sister. My dad is a generous, kind and trustworthy man. He is the person whom I respect most. My mother is skilled in cooking. She can make any dish as long as she puts her mind to it. And what's more, she has the magic ability to turn my mess room into a tidy room. My sister is nine years old. She has learned many things such as drawing, dancing, calligraphy and playing the violin.That's amazing, isn't it? But her favorite thing to do is arts and crafts. She has a pair of dexterous hands to make anything she wants. As for me, I'm a college student, and my major is English. So, with the intention of improving my English skills, I came to italki. Nice to meet everyone here!
Feb 10, 2022 11:04 AM
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