Would anyone correct it? I translated a part of Korean book into English to practice English.
Though it was early morning, the class room was crowded with people. He grabbed a seat on the corner where was almost out of sight of people. There were various aged people and many women. The number of them looked like about 50.
He was convinced that he had made a good choice as looking around. But, he started being fearful of how many people would succeed among us.
The lesson got started. The teacher who looked like being in his 40s had roundish eyes and darkish skin.