yo-yo
As technology developed so fast making friends online is a trendy and popular way. On top of nowadays people’s life space increasing, so people prefer to relax at home during weekends rather than making friends personally. In my opinion some people only need friends to accompany them chatting when they are boring so the virtual friend can fit their intentions
Feb 6, 2022 4:00 PM
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As technology is developing so fast, making friends online is a trendy and popular tendency nowadays. Because today's people living space is increasing, they prefer to relax at home during weekends rather than making friends personally. In my opinion, some people need friends only to keep them company when they are bored, so a virtual friend can fit their intentions only when needed.
Well done yo-yo. You have written an interesting and natural text. The end of the first sentence seemed unfinished, so it was the beginning of the second sentence. I suggest you to study and practise the use of linkers/connectors to make your writing more effective and punchy. Remember also the difference between "boring" and "bored". Please continue practising as you are doing a great job in learning English.
Feb 6, 2022 4:30 PM
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