Well, for me, my last trip is to Shanghai, an international big city in China to meet my friend, during this trip, the interesting part is my friend and I went to the Haidilao, the biggest hotpot chai

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Well, for me, my last trip is to Shanghai, an international big city in China to meet my friend, during this trip, the interesting part is my friend and I went to the Haidilao, the biggest hotpot chain store in my country, may be the foods in it isn't the most delicious, but the service is the best that I have ever seen, so I want to go to this hotpot chain store again, that's all, thank you.

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Feb 8, 2022 9:29 AM

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My last trip was to Shanghai, an international and big city in China. I went there to meet my friend. During this trip, the interesting part was when my friend and I went to the Haidilao, the biggest hotpot chain store in my country. Even though, the foods in it weren't the most delicious, the service was the best that I have ever experienced. So, I would like to go to this hotpot chain store again, that's all, thank you.

Good job! Just be careful when writing about something in the past to use the verbs in their past tense, also, make shorter sentences to avoid using a lot of commas and making errors in the sentence structure.

Feb 8, 2022 1:54 PM

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