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When I’m looking back!! I was a consumer person and it was a big problem for me and I couldn’t solve the problem. The money I was collected over a mother and I used so fast I could.. The funny part was that I didn’t had more money again for paying my house rents.. However I caused a lot to fix this problem and that why I asked for some suggestions from my friends.. I honestly believed that I can be success to find a solution and finally I did with helps of my friends.😁🤝
Feb 9, 2022 8:53 PM
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Looking back at how I used to be, I was a consumer person. it was a big problem for me and I couldn’t find a way to solve the problem. I spent the money I collected over the month as fast as I could. The funny part was that I didn’t have enough money to pay my house rent. However, I worked hard to fix this problem and asked for some suggestions from my friends. I honestly believed that I could be a success and find a solution and finally, with help of my friends, I did😁🤝
Couple of comments: 1) “consumer person” doesn’t sound very natural, I would say something like “I used to buy too much” or “I was a shopping addict” 2) “funny part” in this context is a little strange given that it’s a negative story, so I would say “sad part”
Feb 9, 2022 9:16 PM
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