HEREST
Hello guys. Could you give me feedback, please? Thank you. Chores were much harder for our grandparents' generation. I mean, my grandmother not only washed everything by hand but also hung it out to dry. They have neither the luxury nor convinience of all our labor-saving devices. I'd love a robot that can either coor or clean. I think chores are both boring things and a waste of time.
Feb 27, 2021 1:02 PM
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Hello guys. Could you give me feedback, please? Thank you. Chores were harder for our grandparents' generation. I mean, my grandmother not only washed everything by hand but also hung them out to dry. They had neither the luxury nor convinience of all our labor-saving devices. I'd love a robot that can either Cook or clean. I think chores are both boring and a waste of time.
Feb 27, 2021 1:15 PM
Hello guys. Could you give me feedback, please? Thank you. Chores were much harder for our grandparents' generation. I mean, my grandmother not only washed everything by hand but also hung it out to dry. They have neither the luxury nor convenience of all our labor-saving devices. I'd love a robot that can cook or clean. I think chores are both boring and a waste of time.
Overall very good with only a few minor details. Other than the few spelling issues the grammar was actually technically perfect, I changed it slightly just to make it sound slightly more fluent.
Feb 27, 2021 1:25 PM
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HEREST
Language Skills
English, Spanish
Learning Language
English