Soraya Blake
Well, I have changed my glasses. Now what I studying very much my grasses no work. This monday goin a ophthalmology consultation because need Studing every day for my advance. I want reading a the my favorite books and speak very well in September what is my Birthday. So, though spend money, it’s very important my health eyes. I’m elección the my new glasses for de web. I thinks are simple, but elegant. ( Thank for correction 😁)
Feb 27, 2021 1:04 PM
Corrections · 3
Well, I have to change my glasses. Just now that I'm studying a lot, it doesn't work. This Monday, I'm going to an Ophthalmologist appointment to fix it and go back to study every day for my advance. I want to read my favorite books and speak English (I think it's English haha) very well until my birthday, in September. Although I have to spend money, it’s very important for the health of my eyes. I’m elección (I didn't understand what that word means.) my new glasses for web. I think it's simple, but elegant. ( Thanks for the correction 😁)
Very good, but try to improve the sentence structure. Beside that, try to practice a lot to expand your vocabulary. It will provide you confidence while speaking or writing and you'll be able to make your ideas clearer. I'm still learning and improving on that too, so if anyone finds an error in my correction, I am all ears to be corrected.
Feb 27, 2021 2:10 PM
Well, I have changed my glasses. Now when I am studying a lot, my glasses do not work for me.. This monday, I am going to a ophthalmology consultation because I need to Study every day to improve. I want to read my favorite books and speak very well in September, which is the month of my Birthday. So, even though I am going to spend money, it’s very important I have healthy eyes. I select my new glasses from the web. I think they are simple, but elegant. ( Thank for correction 😁)
Feb 27, 2021 1:13 PM
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Soraya Blake
Language Skills
English, Italian, Portuguese, Spanish
Learning Language
English